Comments received on poems by PeeKaBoo
Expectations
L. B. Mek said:
if only, it was that easy...
as - from isolation, comes festering desperation
and within that regressive cocoon
of warped reality
will soon sprout, cyclical hatred
fuelled by our need, to express and share;
know, that anything you\'re forced to do
or assume, or accept
is never - truly, an honest version of You,
at best its fear\'s coping methodology
at worst, its burgeoning self-hate
that will soon sprout fruits
of Nihilistic - apathy
to all-things: Truthful and Beautiful
in our Blinked experience, of existence...
August 3rd, 2021 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
if only, it was that easy...
as - from isolation, comes festering desperation
and within that regressive cocoon
of warped reality
will soon sprout, cyclical hatred
fuelled by our need, to express and share;
know, that anything you\'re forced to do
or assume, or accept
is never - truly, an honest version of You,
at best its fear\'s coping methodology
at worst, its burgeoning self-hate
that will soon sprout fruits
of Nihilistic - apathy
to all-things: Truthful and Beautiful
in our Blinked experience, of existence...
August 3rd, 2021 04:29
Expectations
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful emotive words Peekaboo but one day that hole will be open again and your life will go into the light.
Welcome to MPS.
August 3rd, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful emotive words Peekaboo but one day that hole will be open again and your life will go into the light.
Welcome to MPS.
August 3rd, 2021 00:30
Expectations
Coyote said:
A very moving and powerful write. Anguish flows from every line. Nicely penned.
August 2nd, 2021 15:44
Coyote said:
A very moving and powerful write. Anguish flows from every line. Nicely penned.
August 2nd, 2021 15:44