Comments received on poems by Prettygirl412



Awakend? or Decived?
dusk arising said:

Interesting, I think you are questioning the faith one of the organised religions gave to you... and why not. They\'ve been getting it wrong for thousands of years, using it to gain a power over people, instilling fear into young children. Go with your heart, it won\'t let you down. We are spiritual beings.

August 18th, 2021 15:05

Awakend? or Decived?
G84 said:

This reminds me of the theme of a rap song by Hopsin - the ill mind of Hopsin 7 if you like rap music 100% listen to it, awesome right posing interesting questions

August 18th, 2021 14:35

Temptation.
Poetic Dan said:

Little bit of bad is good, all about the balance!
Well expressed

August 17th, 2021 06:34

Temptation.
dusk arising said:

That\'s the way it should be when electricity flows between two people. Now work out a way to get along and use the power between you before it repels you apart and you both lose out big time.

August 16th, 2021 19:38