Comments received on poems by kozamu

I told myself the Devil wasn\'t pitiful
tema said:

exquisite. i haven\'t enjoyed a poem as much as this in so long, thank you for writing this.

April 1st, 2022 13:57

L. B. Mek said:

\'Taste my rusted, dilapidated halo
like the bitterness of blood or alcohol, and with it
recognise my fading innocence and childhood,
for as I grow I fall victim and I fade\'..
impassioned and full of uniquely vivid similes
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing

August 20th, 2021 05:51

You were too pure, so they sent you me.
dusk arising said:

Beautiful wisdom.
The most touching poem I have read in a very long time and an absolute must for inclusion into my favourites.

Welcome to MPS dear poet. We are a friendly bunch and this place thrives upon us all commenting upon one anothers poetry. Please feel free to throw stones at my posts. Enjoy yourself.

August 17th, 2021 10:04

You were too pure, so they sent you me.
rebmasters said:

I love this - great title. It reminds me of a poem someone once wrote for me, which went:

\'grace is a strange & capricious goddess
& for some strange reason
she sometimes favours me,
so now I can\'t help but believe
you have been cursed.\'


August 17th, 2021 08:21