Comments received on poems by ShadowWolf1214
Struggle
Jay-Lee Jane said:
i got goosebumps reading this, and for me ive connected this to the BLM protests last year in the US. Not being from there myself though i can link this poem with my own experiences. really love this poem and the power behind your words here!!
August 24th, 2021 18:17
Jay-Lee Jane said:
i got goosebumps reading this, and for me ive connected this to the BLM protests last year in the US. Not being from there myself though i can link this poem with my own experiences. really love this poem and the power behind your words here!!
August 24th, 2021 18:17
Struggle
L. B. Mek said:
\'Y’all giving them another reason
To put us down even more
I’m tired of the crime
But I can’t stop it by myself
I’m just a girl
Who wanna stop
The violence that’s
In our city\'..
sing your worded Truth, you never know
whose ears and eyes, they may open
and awaken, to realising
its only us, who can change
our inherited circumstance...
and Yes: \'All\' Lives Matter!
Past, is something we must
Live with and Confront, to overcome
and Insure, its never Repeated...
but those who chose to sow Chaos
in the name of Activism and Injustice
are the True plague, in Modernity\'s
mindlessness: Virus...
(Covid ain\'t got sht
on people\'s capacity
for pathetic: wilful ignorance
draped in that cocoon
of self-pitying, heartless indifference!)
thanks for choosing to share
and inspiring my little scribbled reply
August 24th, 2021 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'Y’all giving them another reason
To put us down even more
I’m tired of the crime
But I can’t stop it by myself
I’m just a girl
Who wanna stop
The violence that’s
In our city\'..
sing your worded Truth, you never know
whose ears and eyes, they may open
and awaken, to realising
its only us, who can change
our inherited circumstance...
and Yes: \'All\' Lives Matter!
Past, is something we must
Live with and Confront, to overcome
and Insure, its never Repeated...
but those who chose to sow Chaos
in the name of Activism and Injustice
are the True plague, in Modernity\'s
mindlessness: Virus...
(Covid ain\'t got sht
on people\'s capacity
for pathetic: wilful ignorance
draped in that cocoon
of self-pitying, heartless indifference!)
thanks for choosing to share
and inspiring my little scribbled reply
August 24th, 2021 06:54
