Depth
DreamyDumpling said:

like your thoughts devour each-other
choked such you can\'t utter
words never flow as smooth as butter
just way too much clutter


September 1st, 2021 16:53

Don\'t Wake me Up
L. B. Mek said:

a little dramatic in wording
but, I genuinely feel this isn\'t \'just for poetic effect\'
there\'s a sincerity, that comes across
and it\'s not desperation, from your side
or mere momentary sympathy, from mine;
there\'s a subtle middle - realm
of intuitively recognisable, relatability
in the message your poetry conveys,
so yes, do sleep and take your well earned rest
like, we all need to remind ourselves
we All, need
but when you wake-up, in your own sweet time
gives this F\'d up world, another dose
of everything you\'ve got
both barrels blazing, nothing held back
so your next dreams
will once again: be free of regret!
(thank you! for choosing to share
love your pen name btw)

August 31st, 2021 04:24