Comments received on poems by Darsana



The Unseen Diamonds Of The Slum
Doggerel Dave said:

Very romantic , with a good message. And since those kid\'s lives will probably be short, let\'s hope they obtain a little joy somewhere....

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September 1st, 2021 23:07

The Unseen Diamonds Of The Slum
Trenz Pruca said:

Wonderful poem. Thank you for bringing me into your world.

September 1st, 2021 15:28