Comments received on poems by Trevor_Ricardo17$
Their Words
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
“ I turned lemons into lemonades “ love that line 🙂 great poem , nicely expressed . Sometimes we certainly have to listen to ourselves … the words and thoughts of others aren’t always true !
October 22nd, 2021 13:16
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
“ I turned lemons into lemonades “ love that line 🙂 great poem , nicely expressed . Sometimes we certainly have to listen to ourselves … the words and thoughts of others aren’t always true !
October 22nd, 2021 13:16
Life and Changes
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s difficult when we feel sad , some seem to have more than others . We are all worthy of being happy in life
A nice writing 🙂
October 22nd, 2021 06:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s difficult when we feel sad , some seem to have more than others . We are all worthy of being happy in life
A nice writing 🙂
October 22nd, 2021 06:53
Life and Changes
Paul Bell said:
Only a woman can change your season, hopefully back to sunshine soon.
October 22nd, 2021 06:51
Paul Bell said:
Only a woman can change your season, hopefully back to sunshine soon.
October 22nd, 2021 06:51
Confused
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - read and read again and ask what makes sense to you - that way you will establish your own voice.
MPS has, not only this community going, but an archive of great and established poets within easy access - go for it.... Oh, and before I forget ... Welcome to MPS...
September 2nd, 2021 08:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - read and read again and ask what makes sense to you - that way you will establish your own voice.
MPS has, not only this community going, but an archive of great and established poets within easy access - go for it.... Oh, and before I forget ... Welcome to MPS...
September 2nd, 2021 08:36
Confused
L. B. Mek said:
read, read, read
then read some more
or get a short cut, by attending a poetry course
which will teach you
to read, read, read...
before writing
first, learn to read
not just count-out your abc\'s
the real meaning\'s, hidden
between the ink
when you can begin
to differentiate, between
alphabet, grouped for effect
or syllables counted-out, for rhythmic fluidity
and, the real poetry: where sincerity reigns supreme!
then, you\'ll have found an avenue
to realising, exactly why
you want to write, until then
everything else, we scribble
are just elaborated diary entries
in the guise, of wannabe poetry...
good luck, dear Poet!
enjoy the ride, its fleeting but worth every sacrifice!
(in my humble opinion)
September 2nd, 2021 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
read, read, read
then read some more
or get a short cut, by attending a poetry course
which will teach you
to read, read, read...
before writing
first, learn to read
not just count-out your abc\'s
the real meaning\'s, hidden
between the ink
when you can begin
to differentiate, between
alphabet, grouped for effect
or syllables counted-out, for rhythmic fluidity
and, the real poetry: where sincerity reigns supreme!
then, you\'ll have found an avenue
to realising, exactly why
you want to write, until then
everything else, we scribble
are just elaborated diary entries
in the guise, of wannabe poetry...
good luck, dear Poet!
enjoy the ride, its fleeting but worth every sacrifice!
(in my humble opinion)
September 2nd, 2021 03:10
