What keeps me up at night
L. B. Mek said:

maybe its some pent-up anger or frustration,
or some other strong emotion
you need to work through and shed?
either way, utilising your writing to express and address, it
is definitely a step in the right direction,
thanks for sharing


October 22nd, 2021 03:57

You almost made me cry
L. B. Mek said:

I too, sadly
was born with ashen deserts for tear ducts, so I understand
feeling for people so strongly, that you know
will forever consider you, as ungratefully shallow..
thanks for sharing, such a poignant read
(I recommend that like me,
you always travel with a large towel, just in case
a day comes when that typhoon, accumulating in the back of our eyes
is let loose, without restraint..) lol


October 19th, 2021 04:43

Lone Danseur
L. B. Mek said:

a fun spin (pun - unashamedly, intended) lol
dating\'s dancing games: now etiquette\'s dinosaurs
and there\'s no guessing, to meaning
one could click \'like\' by mistake
or flick \'left\' knowing, they meant
an inviting wink of a fleeting \'right\';
say yes, then scream for \'help\'...
best, to get a prenup ready
for every \'encounter\' in that wild jungle
its worth every penny
get a thumb print
signed and sealed, first - before
you wave a hi, clear - from \'side to side\'
far across form the other side
of a star crossed, tentative serendipity
then baby step, your approach
asking with every inch forward
\'will it be worth the drama?\'
No, really: will it?
cos this be modernity\'s
MTV and Netflix: reality
you\'ve inherited
where being \'Catfished\', is the Least
of your worries... lol
(thanks for the laughs
and inspiring
my own little scribbled reply)


September 6th, 2021 06:24