Do people even carry cash anymore?
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor that is such a good indicator of change and of holding on. The familiarity of a house whether it be a body or actual physical structure is something that changes over the years additions, reformation, upkeep all figure in both. A most interesting write about chante in general. Lovely

January 7th, 2026 04:01

I don\'t normally drink socially, but I like to pretend that makes me a worse person
sorenbarrett said:

The turmoil of love presented in this poem with its ups and downs, its chains and banishments. Nicely done

January 4th, 2026 03:51

Sharks can detect the electrical impulses fish give off when they make movements
sorenbarrett said:

There is something morbidly magical about this piece that seems to reveal deterioration as it ambles on. The it ends with a sardonic spasm of being better off. The question is, is it better off dead or living with death. And then there is the part of is this a metaphor for the old year. A fave

January 1st, 2026 04:33

Have you ever stopped to consider how the ant feels when a giant pane of glass floating in the air beams pure sunlight into its carapace?
Demar Desu said:

Is lying a form of imagination? Is lying about life happening because life isn’t worth telling the truth about?

December 14th, 2025 21:30

I think it\'s ridiculous that you can\'t be in a graveyard or cemetery after dark, but whatever
sorenbarrett said:

Touching, sad, full of a sense of regret it speaks out of memories that torment and desires that have long ago burnt out. I see a soul searching among ashes with faded hope of finding embers. Well written and a fave

December 10th, 2025 07:52

Did you know some tree frogs are hermaphroditic?
Doggerel Dave said:

First time I\'ve encountered you - hope it won\'t be the last. Collection of disjointed ideas that somehow made sense .

November 3rd, 2025 17:22

Did you know some tree frogs are hermaphroditic?
sorenbarrett said:

I love the last two lines:
Because it was something I earned
But did not deserve
How many times this is true. A very nice write in most poetic style

November 3rd, 2025 09:29

Sitting on an A/C unit in Spring
Poetic Licence said:

A write full off anxiety over the real importance of family, and the possibility of losing that, well written

October 11th, 2025 04:07

Sitting on an A/C unit in Spring
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that speaks of the importance of family and fears of its loss. The anxiety comes through in the writing and can be felt. Nicely done

October 11th, 2025 03:34

Reading in the paper about local government policies
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting approach looking at things from a negative point of view (We are not)

August 17th, 2025 15:56

Writing this in an office building at 7:32 AM on a Thursday
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphor fills this poem nicely written

August 7th, 2025 13:01

I Don\'t Sleep Anymore
sorenbarrett said:

The passing of a life in this poem. Nicely detailed in just a few lines. Well done

August 5th, 2025 13:17

Maybe I should get it Diet...
Poetic Licence said:

A touching write written with humour, what\'s the point, there\'s to much to worry about so I won\'t bother, nicely done

July 30th, 2025 15:26

Don\'t get me started on termites.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 29th, 2025 18:44

Don\'t get me started on termites.
sorenbarrett said:

A fun metaphor and a fun read well laced with a bit of humor. Nice

July 29th, 2025 12:06