Comments received on poems by IamAperson
Everybody\'s sorry lately
Doggerel Dave said:
Your title and last line perfectly frame your account of terrible domestic sexual abuse. I do hope you gain some strength from your revelation here, so clearly expressed.
Additionally the title and last line highlight the whole ‘sorry’ problem. Such an easy word to say, but without backup in the form of positive action such as recompense or at the very least ‘truth telling’ then the word is valueless.
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September 17th, 2021 17:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Your title and last line perfectly frame your account of terrible domestic sexual abuse. I do hope you gain some strength from your revelation here, so clearly expressed.
Additionally the title and last line highlight the whole ‘sorry’ problem. Such an easy word to say, but without backup in the form of positive action such as recompense or at the very least ‘truth telling’ then the word is valueless.
Welcome to MPS Please feel free to comment here and elsewhere, as is the custom on this site.
September 17th, 2021 17:54
Everybody\'s sorry lately
dusk arising said:
Very delicate but i know how the word sorry could never be enough. it still brings tears to me to broach the subject that sorry will never heal in my life as i\'m sure it does for you.
You\'re very brave to share some of this in your post, probably just scraping the surface of what you\'d like to write.
Yes, I felt the strength of your writing here.
September 17th, 2021 14:53
dusk arising said:
Very delicate but i know how the word sorry could never be enough. it still brings tears to me to broach the subject that sorry will never heal in my life as i\'m sure it does for you.
You\'re very brave to share some of this in your post, probably just scraping the surface of what you\'d like to write.
Yes, I felt the strength of your writing here.
September 17th, 2021 14:53
