Comments received on poems by cottonevie
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L. B. Mek said:
(he \'decided\' to die)?
this is a disturbing line,
from what appears to be a heartfelt dedication, wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing...
reminded me of Seamus Heaney\'s heart wrenching poem \'Mid-Term Break\'
and that legendary last line:
\'A four-foot box, a foot for every year.\'
( https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/57041/mid-term-break )
September 28th, 2021 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
(he \'decided\' to die)?
this is a disturbing line,
from what appears to be a heartfelt dedication, wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing...
reminded me of Seamus Heaney\'s heart wrenching poem \'Mid-Term Break\'
and that legendary last line:
\'A four-foot box, a foot for every year.\'
( https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/57041/mid-term-break )
September 28th, 2021 04:28