Comments received on poems by Benjie the salad
And if we fall to embers
HangingbyaHalo said:
While reading this passage made me exhale like weight lifting from my shoulders.
“And if stars won\'t lighten the darkness, I\'ll lie beside your warm smile n that....that would carry my heavy heart to the skies...”
So Beautiful
Thank you for sharing.
-B-
October 18th, 2021 21:21
HangingbyaHalo said:
While reading this passage made me exhale like weight lifting from my shoulders.
“And if stars won\'t lighten the darkness, I\'ll lie beside your warm smile n that....that would carry my heavy heart to the skies...”
So Beautiful
Thank you for sharing.
-B-
October 18th, 2021 21:21
Hourglass
L. B. Mek said:
raw emotionality, expressed with impassioned imagery
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
raw emotionality, expressed with impassioned imagery
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 03:08
Hourglass
Goldfinch60 said:
May those times be now left in the past and you can move on into a wonderful future.
Welcome to MPS.
October 1st, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
May those times be now left in the past and you can move on into a wonderful future.
Welcome to MPS.
October 1st, 2021 00:45
Hourglass
Benjie the salad said:
Just found about the site....more to come...more mystery n misery
September 30th, 2021 08:16
Benjie the salad said:
Just found about the site....more to come...more mystery n misery
September 30th, 2021 08:16
