Comments received on poems by KJ Delaney
There Was a Time…
L. B. Mek said:
\'the faults in our, unconfronted pasts\'
would be my title for this depressing read of bitingly stark realism,
sorry for the pain and guilt, you walk around with
and hope you find a way, to bridge the gap
to insure some semblance of your relationship can be salvaged
even if only, for the blameless child
in the story..
(if this was a personal account
I laud your bravery and sincerity
thanks for sharing)
December 16th, 2021 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'the faults in our, unconfronted pasts\'
would be my title for this depressing read of bitingly stark realism,
sorry for the pain and guilt, you walk around with
and hope you find a way, to bridge the gap
to insure some semblance of your relationship can be salvaged
even if only, for the blameless child
in the story..
(if this was a personal account
I laud your bravery and sincerity
thanks for sharing)
December 16th, 2021 05:45
Kate (When We Walk)
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t beat a day of puddling.
Something about that little chasm that tiny minds fearlessly go into to.
That includes me. lol
October 16th, 2021 05:40
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t beat a day of puddling.
Something about that little chasm that tiny minds fearlessly go into to.
That includes me. lol
October 16th, 2021 05:40
Momentum
L. B. Mek said:
damn, I\'m out of breadth
an all consuming read, really enticing
thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
damn, I\'m out of breadth
an all consuming read, really enticing
thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 03:53
Evergreen’s Stars
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, those distant stars show the love of those who have passed.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, those distant stars show the love of those who have passed.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:43
Evergreen’s Stars
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely read 🙂
October 12th, 2021 11:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely read 🙂
October 12th, 2021 11:59
Afternoon Sky
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderful effort, truly!
an enjoyable read, thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
this is a wonderful effort, truly!
an enjoyable read, thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:01
