Comments received on poems by Charisse Martin
Along The Watercourse
L. B. Mek said:
\'The sound of water crashing against the land
sedates my over-stimulating brain
I can’t help but smile at whoever looks onto me in the sky
I do not dream of elsewhere
My fingers do not prune
My body is in an everlasting state of repose
Suddenly, there seem to be more rocks than ever before
they grow spikes and points;
uncertainty, gloom, deceit\'..
such a relatable depiction
of the those sudden thorn twists
in our rose fields of life..
a great read, thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2022 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'The sound of water crashing against the land
sedates my over-stimulating brain
I can’t help but smile at whoever looks onto me in the sky
I do not dream of elsewhere
My fingers do not prune
My body is in an everlasting state of repose
Suddenly, there seem to be more rocks than ever before
they grow spikes and points;
uncertainty, gloom, deceit\'..
such a relatable depiction
of the those sudden thorn twists
in our rose fields of life..
a great read, thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2022 06:24
Along The Watercourse
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like life,in every bit of peace,you can find chaos,it can switch so fast and be so overwhelming that for a split second, it\'s as if we are drowning, great piece
March 20th, 2022 22:57
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like life,in every bit of peace,you can find chaos,it can switch so fast and be so overwhelming that for a split second, it\'s as if we are drowning, great piece
March 20th, 2022 22:57
Neighborhood
Paul Bell said:
Almost find this painful, yet we all sometimes see ourselves years ahead, and it sure doesn\'t feel good at all..
October 22nd, 2021 11:19
Paul Bell said:
Almost find this painful, yet we all sometimes see ourselves years ahead, and it sure doesn\'t feel good at all..
October 22nd, 2021 11:19
Comfort In The Uncomfortable
L. B. Mek said:
\'emotion\'s, as the unquantifiable overexcretions, of our feelings..\'
so happy for you!
and thank you, for choosing to share this Brilliant work of confessional Poetry.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Remember, to take a long sustained - deserved, breadth
once in a while
Both in life and your poetry,
it helps
October 21st, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'emotion\'s, as the unquantifiable overexcretions, of our feelings..\'
so happy for you!
and thank you, for choosing to share this Brilliant work of confessional Poetry.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Remember, to take a long sustained - deserved, breadth
once in a while
Both in life and your poetry,
it helps
October 21st, 2021 05:09
The Consequence of Existing
L. B. Mek said:
its funny, we concuss ourselves trying to please
listening, to those
we know, spend
far too much time looking in their own mirror
to offer any \'advise\' that could possibly, matter...
I think this is a great effort, you\'ve written
showcasing subtle quality\'s of the sarcasm and dark humour, that is fast becoming extinct,
due to people lazily refusing the \'work\' required
in \'working\' things out, beyond the blatantly obvious..
which is another aspect of commentary you\'ve imbued into this clever write, thanks for sharing
(but you forget to include
if we choose to \'give it all up\' and just face the world,
baring ourselves, bravely \'naked\'
they have the temerity, to throw - us: in the loony bin...?)
yeah! that\'s the level of absurdity
in our reality
we traverse, ever so delicately:
in our daily dose of infuriating hypocrisy...
October 18th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
its funny, we concuss ourselves trying to please
listening, to those
we know, spend
far too much time looking in their own mirror
to offer any \'advise\' that could possibly, matter...
I think this is a great effort, you\'ve written
showcasing subtle quality\'s of the sarcasm and dark humour, that is fast becoming extinct,
due to people lazily refusing the \'work\' required
in \'working\' things out, beyond the blatantly obvious..
which is another aspect of commentary you\'ve imbued into this clever write, thanks for sharing
(but you forget to include
if we choose to \'give it all up\' and just face the world,
baring ourselves, bravely \'naked\'
they have the temerity, to throw - us: in the loony bin...?)
yeah! that\'s the level of absurdity
in our reality
we traverse, ever so delicately:
in our daily dose of infuriating hypocrisy...
October 18th, 2021 04:51
