What is it i feel?
L. B. Mek said:

so impressive!
you literally infused that state of confusion
into the choice wording of your poetry
which then, insured
almost everyone who reads this poem
will be confused, at first read
and thereby immediately be transported
to that initial sensation/realisation
you yourself, was caught within..
Very impressive, indeed
showcasing a lot of natural poetic talent
that\'s been painstakingly sharpened, focused
into a highly penetrative skill..
So happy for you,
and thank you! for choosing to share

October 22nd, 2021 04:06

What is it i feel?
Lyriclitty said:

Beautiful I love the way you made this thought provokingly clever!

October 22nd, 2021 00:50