Comments received on poems by SriVi



Salt Pearls
Keith said:

Beautiful poetry....

January 16th, 2022 04:33

Salt Pearls
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Love this ! Great writing 🙂🙂

January 15th, 2022 17:29

Cosmic Wrinkle
Doggerel Dave said:

And unknowable?
Thanks for that. I\'m not going to add to that with my very unromantic thoughts here.



November 27th, 2021 05:57

Her Garden - An oases
L. B. Mek said:

(I\'m going to choose, to believe
the sexual innuendo, in your wording
is not that pertinent)
that way, I get to enjoy
this wonderfully scenic portrayal
in your poetry
something that made me remember
similar words
in \'The Alchemist\' by Paulo Coelho,
for me, this is
an accessibly worded, location poem
with sublime brevity, a great read
thanks for choosing to share

November 25th, 2021 04:03

The autumn in me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Love this ) great last lines … “ the autumn is in me “

October 25th, 2021 15:47

The autumn in me
Vamsi Sudha said:

Nice one !! and I could feel the leaf , leave the tree !! Keep Writing

October 25th, 2021 12:47

The autumn in me
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery, thanks for sharing

October 25th, 2021 07:03