Comments received on poems by SriVi
Cosmic Wrinkle
Doggerel Dave said:
And unknowable?
Thanks for that. I\'m not going to add to that with my very unromantic thoughts here.
November 27th, 2021 05:57
Doggerel Dave said:
And unknowable?
Thanks for that. I\'m not going to add to that with my very unromantic thoughts here.
November 27th, 2021 05:57
Her Garden - An oases
L. B. Mek said:
(I\'m going to choose, to believe
the sexual innuendo, in your wording
is not that pertinent)
that way, I get to enjoy
this wonderfully scenic portrayal
in your poetry
something that made me remember
similar words
in \'The Alchemist\' by Paulo Coelho,
for me, this is
an accessibly worded, location poem
with sublime brevity, a great read
thanks for choosing to share
November 25th, 2021 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
(I\'m going to choose, to believe
the sexual innuendo, in your wording
is not that pertinent)
that way, I get to enjoy
this wonderfully scenic portrayal
in your poetry
something that made me remember
similar words
in \'The Alchemist\' by Paulo Coelho,
for me, this is
an accessibly worded, location poem
with sublime brevity, a great read
thanks for choosing to share
November 25th, 2021 04:03
The autumn in me
Caring dove said:
Love this ) great last lines … “ the autumn is in me “
October 25th, 2021 15:47
Caring dove said:
Love this ) great last lines … “ the autumn is in me “
October 25th, 2021 15:47
The autumn in me
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one !! and I could feel the leaf , leave the tree !! Keep Writing
October 25th, 2021 12:47
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one !! and I could feel the leaf , leave the tree !! Keep Writing
October 25th, 2021 12:47
