Comments received on poems by the_leaf008
The Intelligence
Lorna said:
A charming and kind look at the frailty behind what might seem like an intimidating person who is scared, just like the rest of us..... good empathy!
November 8th, 2021 06:12
Lorna said:
A charming and kind look at the frailty behind what might seem like an intimidating person who is scared, just like the rest of us..... good empathy!
November 8th, 2021 06:12
The Intelligence
Eugene S. said:
Intriguing poem. You have my attention. Well said.
November 8th, 2021 03:41
Eugene S. said:
Intriguing poem. You have my attention. Well said.
November 8th, 2021 03:41
The gaze still remains
L. B. Mek said:
like how open and honest you are
thanks for sharing,
(Why can\'t *I* see it clearly \'in front\'
*maybe before/ahead of me
might work better?
or maybe \'see it in plain sight\'?*)
just some suggestions
forgive me, if you find my comment
in any way, negative
please, consider it the mistake of a well meaning, fool
October 26th, 2021 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
like how open and honest you are
thanks for sharing,
(Why can\'t *I* see it clearly \'in front\'
*maybe before/ahead of me
might work better?
or maybe \'see it in plain sight\'?*)
just some suggestions
forgive me, if you find my comment
in any way, negative
please, consider it the mistake of a well meaning, fool
October 26th, 2021 03:44