Comments received on poems by Mermaid
liquid thread
L. B. Mek said:
I think this is a little more revealing than your word choices try to prevent it from becoming,
and that\'s purely down to the sincerity of your feelings and thoughts
at the time time of penning these words, maybe
but what do I know? lol
I will just say, in my humble opinion
there\'s a lot about the framework of our nature and natural trait\'s, we have little control over;
DNA can\'t be changed, merely denied or embraced..
and so our sexual preferences
or what we are drawn towards, in life
is rarely something we have too much choice over
it\'s instinctive
it\'s natural
it is: Who, we are...
better come to terms with it
and find a way to cope
or use it to our advantage
if we\'re not hurting anyone.
(what a wonderful read you\'ve weaved, thank you
for choosing to share)
forgive me if you find my comment in any way disrespectful
sadly, I\'m too opinionated and overzealous with my reactions and comments,
and sometimes I cross boundaries, unintentionally..
November 4th, 2021 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
I think this is a little more revealing than your word choices try to prevent it from becoming,
and that\'s purely down to the sincerity of your feelings and thoughts
at the time time of penning these words, maybe
but what do I know? lol
I will just say, in my humble opinion
there\'s a lot about the framework of our nature and natural trait\'s, we have little control over;
DNA can\'t be changed, merely denied or embraced..
and so our sexual preferences
or what we are drawn towards, in life
is rarely something we have too much choice over
it\'s instinctive
it\'s natural
it is: Who, we are...
better come to terms with it
and find a way to cope
or use it to our advantage
if we\'re not hurting anyone.
(what a wonderful read you\'ve weaved, thank you
for choosing to share)
forgive me if you find my comment in any way disrespectful
sadly, I\'m too opinionated and overzealous with my reactions and comments,
and sometimes I cross boundaries, unintentionally..
November 4th, 2021 04:05
dry molotovs
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
The words went so smooth
Keep sharing
November 2nd, 2021 11:30
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
The words went so smooth
Keep sharing
November 2nd, 2021 11:30
a subtle obsidian symphony
Mermaid said:
Thank you for that uplifting and encouraging feedback :)
November 2nd, 2021 10:29
Mermaid said:
Thank you for that uplifting and encouraging feedback :)
November 2nd, 2021 10:29
a subtle obsidian symphony
L. B. Mek said:
\'an econobox of flint isolation
(a small car\'s spark of stifling humidity)
where redundancy pulls sepia
(where redundancy\'s, consequences)
from dusted mothball frames
(is captured in an old style sepia scene, framed
in neglect\'s dusty mothball themes)\'
how brilliantly you utilise, your impressive vocabulary
to create such \'obsidian\' sharp, poetic imagery..
(its a shame, such high calibre work
usually equates
to a lack of accessibility, for the casual reader
because its us, that miss out on your poetic genius!
still, I thank you for choosing to share
your insightful and pertinent commentary
and I enjoyed
the way you brought comparison with the great depression, as a theme
to unfurl the underlying similarities
with modernity\'s, seemingly endless:
age of anxiety!
A privilege to read your work, dear Poet
as merely a wannabe poet myself
I humbly, read and learn)
November 2nd, 2021 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'an econobox of flint isolation
(a small car\'s spark of stifling humidity)
where redundancy pulls sepia
(where redundancy\'s, consequences)
from dusted mothball frames
(is captured in an old style sepia scene, framed
in neglect\'s dusty mothball themes)\'
how brilliantly you utilise, your impressive vocabulary
to create such \'obsidian\' sharp, poetic imagery..
(its a shame, such high calibre work
usually equates
to a lack of accessibility, for the casual reader
because its us, that miss out on your poetic genius!
still, I thank you for choosing to share
your insightful and pertinent commentary
and I enjoyed
the way you brought comparison with the great depression, as a theme
to unfurl the underlying similarities
with modernity\'s, seemingly endless:
age of anxiety!
A privilege to read your work, dear Poet
as merely a wannabe poet myself
I humbly, read and learn)
November 2nd, 2021 04:06
a subtle obsidian symphony
CuteCrescent said:
Great!! Nice vocabulary used!! 😊🙂
November 1st, 2021 12:21
CuteCrescent said:
Great!! Nice vocabulary used!! 😊🙂
November 1st, 2021 12:21
