Comments received on poems by Miss Pain
The Poet
Nicholas Browning said:
I one time wrote a poem that was 6 stanzas long, and all the stanzas were 6 lines. After I was done, I pressed some random keys on my keyboard and closed the page before saving. I had to rewrite it from memory and it was painful. Your post has brought back some trauma xD Feels like a clever poem with a sinister tone. My condolences for the lost words Comrade.
November 14th, 2021 08:55
Nicholas Browning said:
I one time wrote a poem that was 6 stanzas long, and all the stanzas were 6 lines. After I was done, I pressed some random keys on my keyboard and closed the page before saving. I had to rewrite it from memory and it was painful. Your post has brought back some trauma xD Feels like a clever poem with a sinister tone. My condolences for the lost words Comrade.
November 14th, 2021 08:55
Galaxy
Catina said:
wow, I hope I feel that way when I breakup with my chocolates. Love it .
November 13th, 2021 20:28
Catina said:
wow, I hope I feel that way when I breakup with my chocolates. Love it .
November 13th, 2021 20:28
The Poet
Doggerel Dave said:
And a rewrite would not have worked, I suspect....
Any detail available with respect to the art-show and its relationship to the poem?
November 13th, 2021 19:25
Doggerel Dave said:
And a rewrite would not have worked, I suspect....
Any detail available with respect to the art-show and its relationship to the poem?
November 13th, 2021 19:25
Galaxy
L. B. Mek said:
firstly thanks for the 🔞
and I just think, you write tighter rhymes than most of the current façade, they title rap music! lol
thanks for sharing,
effortlessly brilliant flow!
November 12th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
firstly thanks for the 🔞
and I just think, you write tighter rhymes than most of the current façade, they title rap music! lol
thanks for sharing,
effortlessly brilliant flow!
November 12th, 2021 05:37
Once upon a dream
L. B. Mek said:
love the subtext beyond the narrative
for me, this is what female empowerment was supposed to deliver,
freedom to Choose
even if that choice, is anchored
to the traditions, of a Time
long deemed, archaic..
(beautifully woven, a wonderful read
thank you! for choosing to share)
November 11th, 2021 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
love the subtext beyond the narrative
for me, this is what female empowerment was supposed to deliver,
freedom to Choose
even if that choice, is anchored
to the traditions, of a Time
long deemed, archaic..
(beautifully woven, a wonderful read
thank you! for choosing to share)
November 11th, 2021 04:04
Once upon a dream
Quijote said:
Sounds like he could be a merman to me.
Welcome to the site
November 10th, 2021 18:37
Quijote said:
Sounds like he could be a merman to me.
Welcome to the site
November 10th, 2021 18:37
Once upon a dream
Quijote said:
Sounds like he could be a merman to me.
Welcome to the site
November 10th, 2021 18:37
Quijote said:
Sounds like he could be a merman to me.
Welcome to the site
November 10th, 2021 18:37
