Comments received on poems by Japot
I hate
Gunnar said:
hi there, I like this little poem...thinking though..you use hate love in the first 3 verses...would it be an idea to keep that rythm? In v4 and v6? ...for example v4...I hate people, but I love them more when Im with you. v6 I hate everything, but I love it more when Im with you. Hope my comment does not offend...just liked the rythm in the first 3 verses :-)
November 18th, 2021 17:35
Gunnar said:
hi there, I like this little poem...thinking though..you use hate love in the first 3 verses...would it be an idea to keep that rythm? In v4 and v6? ...for example v4...I hate people, but I love them more when Im with you. v6 I hate everything, but I love it more when Im with you. Hope my comment does not offend...just liked the rythm in the first 3 verses :-)
November 18th, 2021 17:35
Feelings
L. B. Mek said:
complex subject, handled
with nuanced tenderness
an informative, poetic read
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
complex subject, handled
with nuanced tenderness
an informative, poetic read
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 04:15
Feelings
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It is hard … sometimes it feels more difficult than it perhaps should be .
November 17th, 2021 13:55
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It is hard … sometimes it feels more difficult than it perhaps should be .
November 17th, 2021 13:55
Feelings
Paul Bell said:
I think you sum it. Even the positivity can feel like negatively sometimes.
Onwards and upwards.
November 17th, 2021 13:53
Paul Bell said:
I think you sum it. Even the positivity can feel like negatively sometimes.
Onwards and upwards.
November 17th, 2021 13:53
