Comments received on poems by Japot



I hate
Gunnar said:

hi there, I like this little poem...thinking though..you use hate love in the first 3 verses...would it be an idea to keep that rythm? In v4 and v6? ...for example v4...I hate people, but I love them more when Im with you. v6 I hate everything, but I love it more when Im with you. Hope my comment does not offend...just liked the rythm in the first 3 verses :-)

November 18th, 2021 17:35

Feelings
L. B. Mek said:

complex subject, handled
with nuanced tenderness
an informative, poetic read
thanks for sharing

November 18th, 2021 04:15

Feelings
Caring dove said:

It is hard … sometimes it feels more difficult than it perhaps should be .

November 17th, 2021 13:55

Feelings
Paul Bell said:

I think you sum it. Even the positivity can feel like negatively sometimes.
Onwards and upwards.

November 17th, 2021 13:53