Comments received on poems by Christina Elizabeth
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L. B. Mek said:
safety and home
are concepts that are becoming
divorced
with alarming regularity,
getting to the point, where
\'get home safe\'
is becoming a redundant, saying
needs to be reworded, to something like
\'hope you find a safe place
to call home, tonight\'
as a wish, we offer each
every: night...
(great wording and structing of poem
thought provoking, to say the least,
thanks for sharing)
November 19th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
safety and home
are concepts that are becoming
divorced
with alarming regularity,
getting to the point, where
\'get home safe\'
is becoming a redundant, saying
needs to be reworded, to something like
\'hope you find a safe place
to call home, tonight\'
as a wish, we offer each
every: night...
(great wording and structing of poem
thought provoking, to say the least,
thanks for sharing)
November 19th, 2021 04:45