Comments received on poems by Bellapastro777



Sailing
MendedFences27 said:

This sounds scary, frightening, suicidal., or I completely missed the point. Otherwise, well written. The structure implies a descension. \" Captured, triggered, involved\" is what led me to conclude my initial response, and \"take me away\" only added to it. All in all, a very good poem. I liked it, but the theme scared me. - Phil A.


August 16th, 2023 10:14

Outcome
Bellapastro777 said:

Thank you 🥰

March 29th, 2022 05:05

Outcome
L. B. Mek said:

indeed
sing your truth
LOUD and BOLD! dear poet
stay strong

March 29th, 2022 04:54

Evenings
Bellapastro777 said:

Just a quick write that I wanted to share. Definitely not Halloween but imaginary minds could lead there

December 13th, 2021 10:24

Evenings
L. B. Mek said:

why do I feel, like this is a Halloween poem? lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing
\'the *meadow\'s tusk\'
wonderful imagery

December 13th, 2021 05:06

Wishful thinking
L. B. Mek said:

\'I try to speak but nothing can express,
this feeling of sadness and worthlessness.\'
well, for me
your Poetry, sure does
and does it, in a way
that many can relate - to
and find hope - in...
thank you! for choosing to share

November 26th, 2021 04:43

Wishful thinking
Rainbow said:

I wish I feel I could fly to.

November 25th, 2021 15:52

Wishful thinking
Rainbow said:

Hello I can relate to a lot of these feelings you have in this poem . I am sorry you feel sad

November 25th, 2021 15:51