Comments received on poems by screaming goat.



Heart Attack
L. B. Mek said:

a true understanding
and summation
of just how literal
people like their assumption\'s
to be gift wrapped, concrete..
yet, people - as life
are hardly every, exactly
what they seem..
for every ten needy, that screams for attention
there\'s a hundred heart\'s, begging
for an ounce of recognition..
(an intriguing read
thanks for sharing)

January 6th, 2022 04:08

Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:

tight end rhymes and wonderful flow
thanks for sharing,
hope your father is doing better
Happy New Year!

January 5th, 2022 04:33

Protagonist
Ajax (he/xe) said:

This poem is beautiful

December 24th, 2021 11:47

Lamps
Ajax (he/xe) said:

Although I might be wrong here, is \"They flicker, I flicker back\" a nod to Yuri\'s poem in ddlc?

December 24th, 2021 11:41

Wildflowers
Draven said:

Some nice imagery. I like the way you\'ve written it.
It depends on where it comes from, to understand the true meaning behind it. Only you will know that.

December 24th, 2021 00:36

Protagonist
dusk arising said:

What fine poetry young lady. You are blessed with a fine talent.

December 21st, 2021 11:54

Fallen Floodgates
Younique said:

It\'s nice !

December 16th, 2021 16:20

Delusions of all sorts
Paul Bell said:

I\'m thinking the return of Dracula, but would really be pleased if it was my neighbour.

December 15th, 2021 11:55

Just Another Dream
Younique said:

I love it! I also love your profile picture. If you watch Anime, so do I !

December 14th, 2021 19:27

Old, Dirty Classroom.
L. B. Mek said:

more power to you!
Taking ownership of your life
at such a young age is no easy feat
most, just go along
with the maps, their parents drew-up..
try to find an escape
refuse that sensation, of
its you against the world
it really isn\'t
it\'s just you And the world
up to you: to curate it
the way you want..
(thanks for sharing
your image matches your words really well)

December 14th, 2021 04:13

Lamps
Doggerel Dave said:

I don\'t want to decide, I want a clear unambiguous message which informs me of....?

Unless you want to be specific ( and even then with some caution) I would not be reminding anyone to watch their grammar....

Enjoy your stay at MPS.

December 13th, 2021 18:38

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