Comments received on poems by Kevasha
Beauty for Ashes
orchidee said:
A good write K, full of Scriptural passages of truth. :)
December 20th, 2021 02:31
orchidee said:
A good write K, full of Scriptural passages of truth. :)
December 20th, 2021 02:31
Beauty for Ashes
spilleronsheet said:
A very well spun poetry
Taking me on roller coaster of emotions
Those emotions which one can’t deny
Inside we hide
The masks that cover it all time
But alas one day mask breaks
How should one carry along
You beautifully placed the dilemmas of mind
In those gleams of life
Surrender to God
It’s alright to not be okay sometimes
Meekness is not weakness, what a powerful line
A very well crafted poetry
Thanks for sharing
December 20th, 2021 00:28
spilleronsheet said:
A very well spun poetry
Taking me on roller coaster of emotions
Those emotions which one can’t deny
Inside we hide
The masks that cover it all time
But alas one day mask breaks
How should one carry along
You beautifully placed the dilemmas of mind
In those gleams of life
Surrender to God
It’s alright to not be okay sometimes
Meekness is not weakness, what a powerful line
A very well crafted poetry
Thanks for sharing
December 20th, 2021 00:28
I Am Water
spilleronsheet said:
Water one of the five elements of life
So well described
In fact it’s best to be like water
If one understands it
It flows it’s duty
Embraces the creations inside
Flows gently
At times havocs when necessary
You described it so aptly
Keep sharing dear poet
And welcome to Mps
Thanks for sharing
Hoping to read more from your magical pen
December 16th, 2021 13:17
spilleronsheet said:
Water one of the five elements of life
So well described
In fact it’s best to be like water
If one understands it
It flows it’s duty
Embraces the creations inside
Flows gently
At times havocs when necessary
You described it so aptly
Keep sharing dear poet
And welcome to Mps
Thanks for sharing
Hoping to read more from your magical pen
December 16th, 2021 13:17
