Comments received on poems by weee
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Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Really like this
I know editing is like cutting off a limb Feel greater impact by stopping at
Because maybe and just maybe if all of those are long enough then it would be enough for a lifetime and more
Then end with final verse
What do you think?
April 12th, 2022 19:07
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Really like this
I know editing is like cutting off a limb Feel greater impact by stopping at
Because maybe and just maybe if all of those are long enough then it would be enough for a lifetime and more
Then end with final verse
What do you think?
April 12th, 2022 19:07
Nothing
L. B. Mek said:
at least your shedding your anxiety\'s in this ink
you weave with, grasp it
tight
let it guide you
out of that darkness
we all know, and now
write about
after surviving
why not, You
be a survivor, like
the rest of us
come, join
free yourself of restraint
empty your pain
in-to
these poetic words you paint
and maybe, someday
it will be you, writing
these kinda of words
encouraging someone, to break free
and reach for the hope
that awaits
once they realise, all that strife
is nothing new
nothing improbable, as an obstacle
to overcome
it just new, to them..
but we\'re here
to share ourselves
to show them
there\'s nothing about escaping, those tailor made
hell holes, in life;
it all begins, when we choose
to Fight
and say No, I am
No victim
I am, yet
to be defined
I will: Survive...!
January 20th, 2022 08:15
L. B. Mek said:
at least your shedding your anxiety\'s in this ink
you weave with, grasp it
tight
let it guide you
out of that darkness
we all know, and now
write about
after surviving
why not, You
be a survivor, like
the rest of us
come, join
free yourself of restraint
empty your pain
in-to
these poetic words you paint
and maybe, someday
it will be you, writing
these kinda of words
encouraging someone, to break free
and reach for the hope
that awaits
once they realise, all that strife
is nothing new
nothing improbable, as an obstacle
to overcome
it just new, to them..
but we\'re here
to share ourselves
to show them
there\'s nothing about escaping, those tailor made
hell holes, in life;
it all begins, when we choose
to Fight
and say No, I am
No victim
I am, yet
to be defined
I will: Survive...!
January 20th, 2022 08:15
