Tis the season to be unjolly
novaa said:

I loved how the tone of the poem changed in the end. Enjoyed it!

October 15th, 2023 09:16

Brave
arqios said:

Something to carry and activate within us each morning we wake and to remind ourselves off each night before we sleep! Thanks for sharing.

May 29th, 2022 19:53

CRACK\'S ARE HOW LIGHT GETS IN
Doggerel Dave said:

If you must provide references relating to your piece, may I suggest you give some credit to Leonard Cohen\'s “Anthem”.

February 2nd, 2022 03:57

Let It Go
dusk arising said:

Reads like one more text of confusion from biblical times.... or do you actually talk like that?

January 18th, 2022 13:26

In My Dreams
geekslutnerdgirl said:

Sounds like you are describing what many call Heaven. Beautiful.

January 14th, 2022 09:41

Can you feel it
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Everyone needs to be free of their burdens and sadness .. a good writing ))

December 24th, 2021 16:30