Comments received on poems by ajayamitabh7
Man and Existence
L. B. Mek said:
\'But in the morning
man
wrestles, with *why\'s.\'
a really good effort
some insightful commentary
and important questioning
of societies, more subtle
status quo, characteristics..
thanks for sharing
January 10th, 2022 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'But in the morning
man
wrestles, with *why\'s.\'
a really good effort
some insightful commentary
and important questioning
of societies, more subtle
status quo, characteristics..
thanks for sharing
January 10th, 2022 06:06
Man and Existence
spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful
Flowed with so ease
Like a brook
Unceasing and fluid
Liked these lines -
While Orderly pattern is
nature\'s workforce,
But freedom is nature of
a man of course.
As many are options and
choices so gobs.
A Man and this nature are
always at odds.
The poetry was very apt and thought provoking
Thanks for sharing dear poet
January 10th, 2022 03:01
spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful
Flowed with so ease
Like a brook
Unceasing and fluid
Liked these lines -
While Orderly pattern is
nature\'s workforce,
But freedom is nature of
a man of course.
As many are options and
choices so gobs.
A Man and this nature are
always at odds.
The poetry was very apt and thought provoking
Thanks for sharing dear poet
January 10th, 2022 03:01
