Comments received on poems by chriswylie2



A Question of Control
rrodriguez said:

You\'re Invictus. Enjoy the strength of the poem.

January 29th, 2022 00:51

The Dash Between
rrodriguez said:

I\'ve always wondered about the dash in between. I\'d like it to be my legacy. I enjoyed your poem\'s succinct message. Well said my friend.

January 29th, 2022 00:47

The Dash Between
sophin said:

good write, cw. indeed, the prose is interesting, a metaphor for something i am still trying to understand.

January 16th, 2022 23:06

The Dash Between
Buzz Bray said:

Sounds like an analogy to life and love. Interesting how, when written dispassionately, the words assume such power. Good read.

January 16th, 2022 16:58

Flight of the Raven
AuburnScribbler said:

Brilliantly written here Chris, the rhythm that you\'ve chosen, is like the beating wings of the raven itself.

If you love this beast, I recommend a trip to the Tower, where the seven that live there, will greet you well.

Bravo and I hope that all is well!

January 11th, 2022 08:43

Death
Eugene S. said:

1992 - a pertinent year for angst and sorrow. I remember it well as a rebellious \'grunger\' who inadvertently shook hands with death during a high speed head-on. Can relate 100%! Thanks for sharing.

January 5th, 2022 17:02

Flight of the Raven
Eugene S. said:

Wow. Great poem. It causes me to flash back to T.H. White\'s, \"The Once and Future King\" and the lessons within it on existing as a bird. Being able to oversee, in flight, everything. So many connotations - freedom being prominent among them. Welcome to My Poetic Side. I hope you continue your journey here.

January 2nd, 2022 09:56