Comments received on poems by Jake B



Star Struck
Caring dove said:

Beautiful poem ..

July 23rd, 2023 01:32

Lonely Explorer
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing .. tho sad .. nicely expressed

July 23rd, 2023 01:32

The toy at the top of the shelf
Rainbow said:

Lovely

July 22nd, 2023 15:39

The toy at the top of the shelf
tommytoons said:

What an extremely pleasant little story. Thanks for sharing it.

July 22nd, 2023 15:33

The toy at the top of the shelf
Caring dove said:

And we all need to feel loved .
Nice writing ..

July 22nd, 2023 15:27

Lonely Explorer
LIZ said:

Sad but beautiful! I love the darkness and the moon. They reveal so much!

July 21st, 2023 15:46

Lonely Explorer
Rainbow said:

Nice poem . Sounds like very lonely place to be

July 21st, 2023 15:34

The Last Time
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

July 21st, 2023 04:53

The Winter Dragon
Caring dove said:

Nice poem like your words

Especially like this line

She carries the sky. Like a mother carries a child. ..
(Beautiful words )

Cares for the sky

July 20th, 2023 16:25

The Winter Dragon
ellielilleyx said:

Perfect :*

January 7th, 2022 09:34

The Winter Dragon
L. B. Mek said:

I like the layout
kinda looks like wings, unfolded
as your poetry\'s theme, is unfurled..
a wonderfully creative write
thanks for sharing


January 6th, 2022 03:54

The Winter Dragon
Rainbow said:

Lovely poem

January 5th, 2022 16:17