Comments received on poems by Hakikur Rahman
Front path
L. B. Mek said:
light or lighthouse
or a glimmer reflection, spec
of hope
it\'s all, our reward
for our preservation and fortitude..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
March 4th, 2022 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
light or lighthouse
or a glimmer reflection, spec
of hope
it\'s all, our reward
for our preservation and fortitude..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
March 4th, 2022 05:49
End of the day
L. B. Mek said:
such a soothing video and words
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
such a soothing video and words
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 05:24
Migratory birds
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Man, birds seem pretty cool. Why the hell did I get picked to be a person when I could be lively peacefully as literally anything else?
February 24th, 2022 05:26
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Man, birds seem pretty cool. Why the hell did I get picked to be a person when I could be lively peacefully as literally anything else?
February 24th, 2022 05:26
Migratory birds
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful read
escapism within words, made me yearn to fly free
in my life, like the birds...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 24th, 2022 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful read
escapism within words, made me yearn to fly free
in my life, like the birds...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 24th, 2022 05:06
Wheel of life
L. B. Mek said:
at least it seems to be
we so yearn, to affix meaning
to the chaos of our universe..
but someday
we\'ll uncover the science of randomness
and we\'ll understand
that which we can influence, we should
that we can\'t impact, we need to accept
lest we waste a life, swimming
in cyclical rivers of fate...
(an intriguing read, thanks for sharing)
February 18th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
at least it seems to be
we so yearn, to affix meaning
to the chaos of our universe..
but someday
we\'ll uncover the science of randomness
and we\'ll understand
that which we can influence, we should
that we can\'t impact, we need to accept
lest we waste a life, swimming
in cyclical rivers of fate...
(an intriguing read, thanks for sharing)
February 18th, 2022 04:26
Unspoken words
L. B. Mek said:
\'What was to awake in the world, was not awakened.\'
(I\'m not sure, since the days
of our founding antiquity, we\'ve done a great job
of making sure, Chaos
and its children of Strife
never, got Time: to sleep!
(insightful commentary
thanks for sharing)
January 28th, 2022 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'What was to awake in the world, was not awakened.\'
(I\'m not sure, since the days
of our founding antiquity, we\'ve done a great job
of making sure, Chaos
and its children of Strife
never, got Time: to sleep!
(insightful commentary
thanks for sharing)
January 28th, 2022 05:14
My village
Fay Slimm. said:
A calming and well written write of your beautiful village dear poet-friend - I am so glad to have caught your tribute that outlines such quiet activities where people and nature enjoy lives of togetherness. Thank you for sharing it with us.
January 24th, 2022 06:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A calming and well written write of your beautiful village dear poet-friend - I am so glad to have caught your tribute that outlines such quiet activities where people and nature enjoy lives of togetherness. Thank you for sharing it with us.
January 24th, 2022 06:41
Gafur
Hakikur Rahman said:
Delighted to read the fine composition of yours. Yes, in reality those poor souls toils for their entire life, but never been recognized. Thanks to you too for sharing your thoughts. Best regards.
January 23rd, 2022 19:42
Hakikur Rahman said:
Delighted to read the fine composition of yours. Yes, in reality those poor souls toils for their entire life, but never been recognized. Thanks to you too for sharing your thoughts. Best regards.
January 23rd, 2022 19:42
Gafur
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignant portrait you painted
with your words
thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribbled reply, below
forgive my elongated response
just got carried away, as usual)..
the fog of life, worded poetic:
some
toil and strive, in cyclical ignorance
doing what their forefather\'s did
and hoping, wishing
will be enough
to grant them an escape
or their deliver them
their just rewards, in life..
but
existence is too cruel, to leave too chance
even now
even in this old beaten down, stage of life
we must shuffle, a little closer
to whatever it is, we think
can make us happier
or offer solace;
Never, surrender
never let your ending, miniscule
our worth
\'We\' all, belong
to those whims of Fate
as equally
as those born
with silver spoons
and kingdom\'s to inherit,
till someone returns from that six feet divide
to let us know, it all ends
with that final blink
we must, reach
for what meaning we can glean
for this gift of breath, we were given...
January 20th, 2022 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignant portrait you painted
with your words
thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribbled reply, below
forgive my elongated response
just got carried away, as usual)..
the fog of life, worded poetic:
some
toil and strive, in cyclical ignorance
doing what their forefather\'s did
and hoping, wishing
will be enough
to grant them an escape
or their deliver them
their just rewards, in life..
but
existence is too cruel, to leave too chance
even now
even in this old beaten down, stage of life
we must shuffle, a little closer
to whatever it is, we think
can make us happier
or offer solace;
Never, surrender
never let your ending, miniscule
our worth
\'We\' all, belong
to those whims of Fate
as equally
as those born
with silver spoons
and kingdom\'s to inherit,
till someone returns from that six feet divide
to let us know, it all ends
with that final blink
we must, reach
for what meaning we can glean
for this gift of breath, we were given...
January 20th, 2022 05:53
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