Comments received on poems by Theangelwithabrokenwing



Triggering poem be aware: Untitled poem
L. B. Mek said:

firstly, I laud the steps
you tried to take
to prevent your words
causing hurt
or unwanted, reactions
to your readers;
I truly wish more of us
can learn
to take that extra second
of consideration, for others
while we\'re inking out
our suffering, caused
by other\'s: ill-consideration...
(a raw, emotive write
that reads, true and rather
\'matter of fact\', in its details
and not, so poetically embellished
it has lost
any of its original, grounded perspectives)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
please, try to remember
its much better, for us
\'all and any of us!\'
to \'seek\' help
rather than, wait
till we \'need\' help
in life..
stay strong!

January 10th, 2022 05:17

Triggering poem be aware: Untitled poem
1ofMyPassions said:

Powerful poem. Thank you for the read.

January 9th, 2022 21:02