Comments received on poems by RickthePoetWarrior
Work Daze On Weak Ends
jarcher54 said:
Thanks for a little laugh and for TRYING to make art out of bytes and apps. We aren\'t there yet but keep at it old boy!
September 9th, 2022 11:22
jarcher54 said:
Thanks for a little laugh and for TRYING to make art out of bytes and apps. We aren\'t there yet but keep at it old boy!
September 9th, 2022 11:22
Wethering The Storm
arqios said:
Whether the weather is hot or cold, it would seem politics never grows old. Thanks for sharing.
September 6th, 2022 09:31
arqios said:
Whether the weather is hot or cold, it would seem politics never grows old. Thanks for sharing.
September 6th, 2022 09:31
I Am Has Been Will Be
L. B. Mek said:
lol, a wonderful game
of name that famous line, but
I imagine in the context of your book
this will have a more solidified meaning
as you\'re exemplifying, while sampling
some of the most beloved works
in western literature\'s overflowing, Poetic\'s cannon..
a fun read, but I fear
you gave yourself a \'complex\'
by starting
with that brilliant, cocktail
of a first line.. lol
personally I got real excited
when you included
the criminally underrated \'Elizabeth Bishop\'
those cascading stanzas, from that poem
are one of the very best, to have ever been penned
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing, a great poetic treat!
\'Do they live in the station?
It has a cement porch
behind the pumps, and on it
a set of crushed and grease-
impregnated wickerwork;
on the wicker sofa
a dirty dog, quite comfy.
Some comic books provide
the only note of color--
of certain color. They lie
upon a big dim doily
draping a taboret
(part of the set), beside
a big hirsute begonia.
Why the extraneous plant?
Why the taboret?
Why, oh why, the doily?
(Embroidered in daisy stitch
with marguerites, I think,
and heavy with gray crochet.)
Somebody embroidered the doily.
Somebody waters the plant,
or oils it, maybe. Somebody
arranges the rows of cans
so that they softly say:
ESSO--SO--SO--SO
to high-strung automobiles.
Somebody loves us all.\'\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-2931 )
January 21st, 2022 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
lol, a wonderful game
of name that famous line, but
I imagine in the context of your book
this will have a more solidified meaning
as you\'re exemplifying, while sampling
some of the most beloved works
in western literature\'s overflowing, Poetic\'s cannon..
a fun read, but I fear
you gave yourself a \'complex\'
by starting
with that brilliant, cocktail
of a first line.. lol
personally I got real excited
when you included
the criminally underrated \'Elizabeth Bishop\'
those cascading stanzas, from that poem
are one of the very best, to have ever been penned
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing, a great poetic treat!
\'Do they live in the station?
It has a cement porch
behind the pumps, and on it
a set of crushed and grease-
impregnated wickerwork;
on the wicker sofa
a dirty dog, quite comfy.
Some comic books provide
the only note of color--
of certain color. They lie
upon a big dim doily
draping a taboret
(part of the set), beside
a big hirsute begonia.
Why the extraneous plant?
Why the taboret?
Why, oh why, the doily?
(Embroidered in daisy stitch
with marguerites, I think,
and heavy with gray crochet.)
Somebody embroidered the doily.
Somebody waters the plant,
or oils it, maybe. Somebody
arranges the rows of cans
so that they softly say:
ESSO--SO--SO--SO
to high-strung automobiles.
Somebody loves us all.\'\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-2931 )
January 21st, 2022 06:01
Breast Fantasy
L. B. Mek said:
lol
good luck with your book/writing..
thanks for sharing, this fun read
January 17th, 2022 07:39
L. B. Mek said:
lol
good luck with your book/writing..
thanks for sharing, this fun read
January 17th, 2022 07:39
Oh Romano, Romano, Wherefore Art Thou Romano
RickthePoetWarrior said:
Thanks Keith. It was a tribute to that style.
January 16th, 2022 17:10
RickthePoetWarrior said:
Thanks Keith. It was a tribute to that style.
January 16th, 2022 17:10
Oh Romano, Romano, Wherefore Art Thou Romano
Keith said:
Amusing and clever - a lovely nod to Chaucer in there too.
January 16th, 2022 04:30
Keith said:
Amusing and clever - a lovely nod to Chaucer in there too.
January 16th, 2022 04:30
