Comments received on poems by Eff Lynch B
Less and not Full
Rocky Lagou said:
This right here is poetically immaculate. Your imagery and metaphors are amazing. That \"Lysol\" line reminded me of Sylvia Plath\'s poem \"The Colossus\" in whe she also mentions Lysol. Back to the point, your message is true and rings to many. The rich and priviliged are \"weighing their gold\" while we\'re left hopeless. I pray for better days.
April 25th, 2022 10:34
Rocky Lagou said:
This right here is poetically immaculate. Your imagery and metaphors are amazing. That \"Lysol\" line reminded me of Sylvia Plath\'s poem \"The Colossus\" in whe she also mentions Lysol. Back to the point, your message is true and rings to many. The rich and priviliged are \"weighing their gold\" while we\'re left hopeless. I pray for better days.
April 25th, 2022 10:34
What ails you child?
L. B. Mek said:
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uZ5V6QuAC24 )
thanks for sharing,
\'Break the Shell, and Dance
free yourself
of your own constraints and watch
your horizon\'s, blossom
to the you, You have it
in you: to become!\'
January 17th, 2022 08:34
L. B. Mek said:
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uZ5V6QuAC24 )
thanks for sharing,
\'Break the Shell, and Dance
free yourself
of your own constraints and watch
your horizon\'s, blossom
to the you, You have it
in you: to become!\'
January 17th, 2022 08:34
Sister I want to play
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"No person stands so tall as when they stoop to help a child.\" From the 1973 movie,Slither,although in the movie it\'s \"man\",but I thought it only appropriate to change it,but that\'s neither here,nor there. I understand this happened between mother and child,but I thought it to still be a great quote for this little gem you\'ve penned so well Rozina😃🌹 Bravo!🌹 Take a bow and shine bright🌟
January 15th, 2022 12:39
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"No person stands so tall as when they stoop to help a child.\" From the 1973 movie,Slither,although in the movie it\'s \"man\",but I thought it only appropriate to change it,but that\'s neither here,nor there. I understand this happened between mother and child,but I thought it to still be a great quote for this little gem you\'ve penned so well Rozina😃🌹 Bravo!🌹 Take a bow and shine bright🌟
January 15th, 2022 12:39
Sister I want to play
Paul Bell said:
Sad is the right description, but also full of great memories.
January 15th, 2022 10:04
Paul Bell said:
Sad is the right description, but also full of great memories.
January 15th, 2022 10:04
Sister I want to play
Dr. Bhratri Bhushan said:
I loved the way it flowed so effortlessly. I have read it 5 times consecutively and feels fresher with every read.
January 15th, 2022 05:04
Dr. Bhratri Bhushan said:
I loved the way it flowed so effortlessly. I have read it 5 times consecutively and feels fresher with every read.
January 15th, 2022 05:04
