Comments received on poems by Shandi
Dreaming
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write with sadness and anger at the father and what he did and how they all paid for that, emotional read
February 24th, 2025 03:42
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write with sadness and anger at the father and what he did and how they all paid for that, emotional read
February 24th, 2025 03:42
Dreaming
sorenbarrett said:
I sense sadness, anger and resentment in this poem. Written as autobiographical from a second person view it pulls at heart strings and in that it evokes emotion I judge it to be artful. Nicely done.
February 24th, 2025 02:40
sorenbarrett said:
I sense sadness, anger and resentment in this poem. Written as autobiographical from a second person view it pulls at heart strings and in that it evokes emotion I judge it to be artful. Nicely done.
February 24th, 2025 02:40
Dreaming
NafisaSB said:
beautiful eulogy to your mom -believe me she is in a much better place, and looking out for you
February 23rd, 2025 23:58
NafisaSB said:
beautiful eulogy to your mom -believe me she is in a much better place, and looking out for you
February 23rd, 2025 23:58
The Lessons You Learn
L. B. Mek said:
\'We\'re so desperate to seal,
Up all of the hatches.
Hanging on,
For dear life inside,
Not quite literally,
Moreso, mentally.\'
so true!
thank you!
for choosing to share your wisdom
March 28th, 2022 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'We\'re so desperate to seal,
Up all of the hatches.
Hanging on,
For dear life inside,
Not quite literally,
Moreso, mentally.\'
so true!
thank you!
for choosing to share your wisdom
March 28th, 2022 05:23
Mom
Rozina said:
I hope your mum will get better and that you and your family will get through this. All the very best.
January 22nd, 2022 18:34
Rozina said:
I hope your mum will get better and that you and your family will get through this. All the very best.
January 22nd, 2022 18:34
Mom
pearlsofdew22 said:
These words are so strong, they reach the heart and can feel your grieve and pain, but It also says the great person you are and I know your mum is fighting a big battle and hope she be ok and also you be well, and someone who writes as you do says it all, you have a lovely soul,
January 22nd, 2022 17:41
pearlsofdew22 said:
These words are so strong, they reach the heart and can feel your grieve and pain, but It also says the great person you are and I know your mum is fighting a big battle and hope she be ok and also you be well, and someone who writes as you do says it all, you have a lovely soul,
January 22nd, 2022 17:41
Mom
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This was an amazing write, and I hope your mom gets better.
January 22nd, 2022 13:01
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This was an amazing write, and I hope your mom gets better.
January 22nd, 2022 13:01
