Comments received on poems by AMusings
Transition.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant in its conceptual, inception
you did so well to unfurl and word it
so relatable..
a great read, thanks for sharing
July 28th, 2022 01:43
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant in its conceptual, inception
you did so well to unfurl and word it
so relatable..
a great read, thanks for sharing
July 28th, 2022 01:43
Transition.
Raven333 said:
Liked your poem, it was so truthful.. I hate moving!!!
July 27th, 2022 20:08
Raven333 said:
Liked your poem, it was so truthful.. I hate moving!!!
July 27th, 2022 20:08
Wraith.
Paul Bell said:
Okay, I\'m thinking this guy ain\'t flavour of the month, any month, but he just won\'t take the hint. This is why the baseball bat was invented.
July 7th, 2022 08:58
Paul Bell said:
Okay, I\'m thinking this guy ain\'t flavour of the month, any month, but he just won\'t take the hint. This is why the baseball bat was invented.
July 7th, 2022 08:58
Another girl in the churn.
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'ll never be whole,
So you broke
those barely formed.\'
Brilliant!
stay Beautiful, stay Strong
dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share
July 1st, 2022 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'ll never be whole,
So you broke
those barely formed.\'
Brilliant!
stay Beautiful, stay Strong
dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share
July 1st, 2022 03:24
Another girl in the churn.
Hollow Enigma said:
I am so sorry you were trapped and torn. but if I\'m being honest at one point I was that asshole. Of course, I was never a conscious decision. I ruined my own life and blamed life itself. Then when help or something someone came into my life that curbed my loneliness I cut them and pulled them with my downward spiral then had the audacity and closed-mindedness to be angry at them. I hope I changed but who knows. Great poem keep writing.
July 1st, 2022 00:23
Hollow Enigma said:
I am so sorry you were trapped and torn. but if I\'m being honest at one point I was that asshole. Of course, I was never a conscious decision. I ruined my own life and blamed life itself. Then when help or something someone came into my life that curbed my loneliness I cut them and pulled them with my downward spiral then had the audacity and closed-mindedness to be angry at them. I hope I changed but who knows. Great poem keep writing.
July 1st, 2022 00:23
Time.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Time
is ruled, by
Perspective..\'
ergo
at onset of an arduous journey
or stuck in traffic
Time, is seemingly endless
a sloth, havoc
presence
in our unbearably, stagnant existence
and then, at arrival
of our destination
or while getting in our beds
and looking at our calendars
we remark, in bewilderment
\'We never seem to have much
Time...!\'
lol
in the words of Sherlock Holmes
\'Everything in this world is relative, my dear Watson.\'
(thanks for sharing, such
a thought provoking read)
June 3rd, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'Time
is ruled, by
Perspective..\'
ergo
at onset of an arduous journey
or stuck in traffic
Time, is seemingly endless
a sloth, havoc
presence
in our unbearably, stagnant existence
and then, at arrival
of our destination
or while getting in our beds
and looking at our calendars
we remark, in bewilderment
\'We never seem to have much
Time...!\'
lol
in the words of Sherlock Holmes
\'Everything in this world is relative, my dear Watson.\'
(thanks for sharing, such
a thought provoking read)
June 3rd, 2022 03:45
Time.
tallisman said:
This is good, it’s got me examining the concept of time and it’s way to early in the morning here for that! Really like this, thanks for sharing 😁
June 3rd, 2022 00:53
tallisman said:
This is good, it’s got me examining the concept of time and it’s way to early in the morning here for that! Really like this, thanks for sharing 😁
June 3rd, 2022 00:53
Loved and Lost
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
but we\'re not all bad eggs
promise
you need not, give up
on happiness
just learn to point out
and bin
the cracked shelled ones
in the pack...
thanks for sharing
February 7th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
but we\'re not all bad eggs
promise
you need not, give up
on happiness
just learn to point out
and bin
the cracked shelled ones
in the pack...
thanks for sharing
February 7th, 2022 05:26
Wicked Heart.
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
And this answers any question as to why she calls herself RebelPrincess😀 So fiercely expressed🌩Thanks for sharing 🌞✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 19:55
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
And this answers any question as to why she calls herself RebelPrincess😀 So fiercely expressed🌩Thanks for sharing 🌞✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 19:55
