Comments received on poems by Freya



Haunting lullaby
L. B. Mek said:

\'The ghost behind
flashing lights
following you with every step
Not even the purest river
can clean up all regret.
Your bloody arms
Rotten heart
love deprived
hollow inside\'
simply Brilliant!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

February 24th, 2022 06:36

Haunting lullaby
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

Such an intriguing start, and it never lets up. Sometimes vagueness adds more to it than details.

February 24th, 2022 05:11

Haunting lullaby
Paul Bell said:

What a great poem.
It has everything, intrigue, revenge, the search for justice. Is there a sequel.

February 24th, 2022 04:21