Comments received on poems by Ardhendu Pal
Forelone Thy Gift
L. B. Mek said:
\'Be good do good become beneficial like log of wood
Multidimensional multidisciplinary multiplicity of usability
Can’t keep pace though irrespective of scarce motivational food
The inner dwelling innocent soul isn’t finding this world in reliability\'
I laud your poetic ambition
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Be good do good become beneficial like log of wood
Multidimensional multidisciplinary multiplicity of usability
Can’t keep pace though irrespective of scarce motivational food
The inner dwelling innocent soul isn’t finding this world in reliability\'
I laud your poetic ambition
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:21
A Soldier\'s Trivia
Rocky Lagou said:
A big salute to all the ones who have served and the ones who have sacrificed for our freedom! Great poem! 💖
March 1st, 2022 15:10
Rocky Lagou said:
A big salute to all the ones who have served and the ones who have sacrificed for our freedom! Great poem! 💖
March 1st, 2022 15:10
The War Zone Trivia
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pathetic are those who advocate the barbarians
More deplorable are the suppliers of weapons
Till the last arm remains
That\'ll sing melancholic strains\'
so true, thanks for sharing
may I recommend the Poem
\'waiting for the Barbarians\' by C. P. Cavafy
( https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/51294/waiting-for-the-barbarians )
February 28th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pathetic are those who advocate the barbarians
More deplorable are the suppliers of weapons
Till the last arm remains
That\'ll sing melancholic strains\'
so true, thanks for sharing
may I recommend the Poem
\'waiting for the Barbarians\' by C. P. Cavafy
( https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/51294/waiting-for-the-barbarians )
February 28th, 2022 06:14
