Comments received on poems by Ivy Madara
Cardiac neglect
Rocky Lagou said:
That line \"heard when skin meets skin and never heart meets heart\" really hit deep. Love is disappointing at times, and could really destroy one\'s confidence. I just hope you can allow yourself the time to recover and seek new chances.
April 26th, 2022 08:34
Rocky Lagou said:
That line \"heard when skin meets skin and never heart meets heart\" really hit deep. Love is disappointing at times, and could really destroy one\'s confidence. I just hope you can allow yourself the time to recover and seek new chances.
April 26th, 2022 08:34
Cardiac neglect
Distant View said:
A sad poem, but one I\'m sure many of us can relate to. We all feel emotional pain at some time in our lives. We all need love. I\'m sure you will find love too in due time.
April 26th, 2022 08:26
Distant View said:
A sad poem, but one I\'m sure many of us can relate to. We all feel emotional pain at some time in our lives. We all need love. I\'m sure you will find love too in due time.
April 26th, 2022 08:26
The egg and me
L. B. Mek said:
well I hope
that symbolic image of you as an egg
can one day, evolve
in-to a Chocolate egg
and even then, if you still find cracks
in your surface
or those sudden monsoon\'s of life
have you thinking
you\'ll end-up melting, then
trust, that
if you find a way to cultivate
an egg shape mould
to cocoon yourself, within
through the worst of life, then
when, that oppressive tomorrow
becomes your yesterday
and your life\'s
monsoon heated, teardrop wetness
is exchanged for a dawning
of Spring\'s, crisp smiling morning
you\'ll still be back
in your chocolate egg, shape
maybe a little dented and jagged
but still that sweet egg
everyone, will want a piece of...
March 22nd, 2022 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
well I hope
that symbolic image of you as an egg
can one day, evolve
in-to a Chocolate egg
and even then, if you still find cracks
in your surface
or those sudden monsoon\'s of life
have you thinking
you\'ll end-up melting, then
trust, that
if you find a way to cultivate
an egg shape mould
to cocoon yourself, within
through the worst of life, then
when, that oppressive tomorrow
becomes your yesterday
and your life\'s
monsoon heated, teardrop wetness
is exchanged for a dawning
of Spring\'s, crisp smiling morning
you\'ll still be back
in your chocolate egg, shape
maybe a little dented and jagged
but still that sweet egg
everyone, will want a piece of...
March 22nd, 2022 06:38
The egg and me
JAYSON2022 said:
Oh this poem is sad and I appreciate this the way I read I remember my childhood experience like a egg great job
March 22nd, 2022 04:03
JAYSON2022 said:
Oh this poem is sad and I appreciate this the way I read I remember my childhood experience like a egg great job
March 22nd, 2022 04:03
INSECURITIES
dusk arising said:
That is a well written piece. Gripping too.
Welcome to MPS.
March 8th, 2022 08:14
dusk arising said:
That is a well written piece. Gripping too.
Welcome to MPS.
March 8th, 2022 08:14
