Comments received on poems by Frango
Funny?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Wept his way through all of Chekhov\'s comedies\'..
well, who needs a chapter
of dress code and behavioural traits
as analysation
to paint, a character\'s - depth
when \'wept\'
placed before a few choice reference words
will do, just as much
in One line...!
(\'Oh God!
If there is a God
He can\'t believe in religion
I mean
We would be to him
In intelligence
And possibly in height
Like we are to the ants
I mean
It says in the Bible
God created us in his image
It says nothing about size
Say you are God
And every Sunday
These ants get together in
Magnificent but ant-sized buildings
Repeating the words you\'ve heard hundreds of thousands of times before
And in addition sing boring songs
Many of which end in plagal cadences
You
Unaided by GTS training
Have made
Out of nothing
Thousands of galaxies
Millions of planets
Billions of stars
Are you interested in these ants ?
Added to which
You have 6 arms
And only speak *Sanskrit, Sindhu\')
and \'A fitting Present\'
is just, wisdom\'s
distilled, Genius!!!
(is it ok if I read
H, as hate
and N, as
obstinacy\'s: Negligence)
Thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
I bow to your superior talent!
April 8th, 2022 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'Wept his way through all of Chekhov\'s comedies\'..
well, who needs a chapter
of dress code and behavioural traits
as analysation
to paint, a character\'s - depth
when \'wept\'
placed before a few choice reference words
will do, just as much
in One line...!
(\'Oh God!
If there is a God
He can\'t believe in religion
I mean
We would be to him
In intelligence
And possibly in height
Like we are to the ants
I mean
It says in the Bible
God created us in his image
It says nothing about size
Say you are God
And every Sunday
These ants get together in
Magnificent but ant-sized buildings
Repeating the words you\'ve heard hundreds of thousands of times before
And in addition sing boring songs
Many of which end in plagal cadences
You
Unaided by GTS training
Have made
Out of nothing
Thousands of galaxies
Millions of planets
Billions of stars
Are you interested in these ants ?
Added to which
You have 6 arms
And only speak *Sanskrit, Sindhu\')
and \'A fitting Present\'
is just, wisdom\'s
distilled, Genius!!!
(is it ok if I read
H, as hate
and N, as
obstinacy\'s: Negligence)
Thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
I bow to your superior talent!
April 8th, 2022 03:51
Written in Cuba – Number 2
Dahlia said:
excellent saga
enjoyed through and through...
March 24th, 2022 14:08
Dahlia said:
excellent saga
enjoyed through and through...
March 24th, 2022 14:08
Written in Cuba. Number 1
L. B. Mek said:
(just a privilege
to read your poetic genius, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share)
\'If you put a very large glass
On a slippery world
It would start to slide
And would fall off the world
What......?
Fuck gravity
This is a metaphor
So I put this glass on the table
And
Crash !
What......?
Oh I just trod on that one\'
\'Tonight no ear plugs
The sound is steady
The sound of wind
Of water
Of the receding tide
In Havana it was lift salsa
An erratic rhythm section
And out of time chickens
In Santiago the sound is steady
Tonight no ear plugs\'
\'I\'m not the first
There are footprints
No one is here now
Well
Almost no one
I swim in a new way now
Then I see it
Shining black
I leave the water
I approach with an almost
Religious reverence
FLASHBACK
I am in the art Museum Havana\'
March 24th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
(just a privilege
to read your poetic genius, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share)
\'If you put a very large glass
On a slippery world
It would start to slide
And would fall off the world
What......?
Fuck gravity
This is a metaphor
So I put this glass on the table
And
Crash !
What......?
Oh I just trod on that one\'
\'Tonight no ear plugs
The sound is steady
The sound of wind
Of water
Of the receding tide
In Havana it was lift salsa
An erratic rhythm section
And out of time chickens
In Santiago the sound is steady
Tonight no ear plugs\'
\'I\'m not the first
There are footprints
No one is here now
Well
Almost no one
I swim in a new way now
Then I see it
Shining black
I leave the water
I approach with an almost
Religious reverence
FLASHBACK
I am in the art Museum Havana\'
March 24th, 2022 04:28
Written in Cuba. Number 1
Dahlia said:
an amazing portrayal of Cuba
quiete entertaining and fun, loved your humor, Sir...
Dahlia Vitalia
March 23rd, 2022 18:22
Dahlia said:
an amazing portrayal of Cuba
quiete entertaining and fun, loved your humor, Sir...
Dahlia Vitalia
March 23rd, 2022 18:22