Comments received on poems by Dahlia
morning birds
Paul Bell said:
Birds are too intelligent, that scarecrow I put down, so they wouldn\'t eat my grass seeds didn\'t work.
April 5th, 2022 14:08
Paul Bell said:
Birds are too intelligent, that scarecrow I put down, so they wouldn\'t eat my grass seeds didn\'t work.
April 5th, 2022 14:08
i am sorry
Ok Waleed said:
My favorite stories are the true ones. I’m sorry it happened but thank you for sharing
April 5th, 2022 13:23
Ok Waleed said:
My favorite stories are the true ones. I’m sorry it happened but thank you for sharing
April 5th, 2022 13:23
morning birds
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. nature is so beautiful and its splendor is unmeasurable. It\'s a true inspiration.
April 5th, 2022 12:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. nature is so beautiful and its splendor is unmeasurable. It\'s a true inspiration.
April 5th, 2022 12:06
glorious mystery 2
L. B. Mek said:
I think the key word, in your poem
for me, at least
is \'Open\'
indeed, may all who believe
in anything
be \'Open\', enough
in spirit, heart and Mind
to include
all that diversity, within our humanity
in their conceptualisation
of sanctified, revelation
for everyone
not only those, who they identify with...
Indeed, let us be Open
to that possibility, where
all: are deemed Worthy!
(a wonderful poem
thanks for sharing your passion
and championing the message
of \'Inclusive Openness\', dear Poet
sadly, a very lacking element
within organised faith systems
where only the few, can aspire
for that 8 Ball, chance
of heavenly redemption)
April 4th, 2022 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
I think the key word, in your poem
for me, at least
is \'Open\'
indeed, may all who believe
in anything
be \'Open\', enough
in spirit, heart and Mind
to include
all that diversity, within our humanity
in their conceptualisation
of sanctified, revelation
for everyone
not only those, who they identify with...
Indeed, let us be Open
to that possibility, where
all: are deemed Worthy!
(a wonderful poem
thanks for sharing your passion
and championing the message
of \'Inclusive Openness\', dear Poet
sadly, a very lacking element
within organised faith systems
where only the few, can aspire
for that 8 Ball, chance
of heavenly redemption)
April 4th, 2022 03:23
glorious mystery 2
Crowns4Christ said:
Precisely my dear dahlia, exactly right,if only everyone could understand this.
April 3rd, 2022 17:59
Crowns4Christ said:
Precisely my dear dahlia, exactly right,if only everyone could understand this.
April 3rd, 2022 17:59
children of the sea
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love the shortness of this poem and the message feels quite grand, however, I can\'t seem to put my finger on what it may be.
April 1st, 2022 12:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love the shortness of this poem and the message feels quite grand, however, I can\'t seem to put my finger on what it may be.
April 1st, 2022 12:10
etchings
L. B. Mek said:
if we can, undo
our mistakes
in time..
we can but hope, dear poet
a Great write! we owe it all
to Nature
March 31st, 2022 02:54
L. B. Mek said:
if we can, undo
our mistakes
in time..
we can but hope, dear poet
a Great write! we owe it all
to Nature
March 31st, 2022 02:54
sounds of spring
dean langmuir said:
Lifes predictable puzzle,that\'s a beauty.take care
March 29th, 2022 17:19
dean langmuir said:
Lifes predictable puzzle,that\'s a beauty.take care
March 29th, 2022 17:19
prayer
James Michael said:
Possibly a prayer that will never be answered. There certainly is a balance that exists that we must seek.
Absolutely fascinating poetry. Well done!
March 26th, 2022 20:44
James Michael said:
Possibly a prayer that will never be answered. There certainly is a balance that exists that we must seek.
Absolutely fascinating poetry. Well done!
March 26th, 2022 20:44
nature
L. B. Mek said:
yes, I too believe
as harsh and crude
as it may make me sound
but some people, are Naturally
meant to be treated
like that dog turd
we bypass, on the streets
to avoid
stinking-up, our lives
so yes: we Must:
\'pass them, pass them
without remorse
watch them eventually rot...\'
(so as , we can survive!)
thanks for sharing
liked your imagery in this lines as well:
\'after a minute or so
in the darkened lense
there was no good intention\'
March 22nd, 2022 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
yes, I too believe
as harsh and crude
as it may make me sound
but some people, are Naturally
meant to be treated
like that dog turd
we bypass, on the streets
to avoid
stinking-up, our lives
so yes: we Must:
\'pass them, pass them
without remorse
watch them eventually rot...\'
(so as , we can survive!)
thanks for sharing
liked your imagery in this lines as well:
\'after a minute or so
in the darkened lense
there was no good intention\'
March 22nd, 2022 05:03
orison
dean langmuir said:
This one took a bit for me,words and composition,did you mean for slicing within to be left side of poem,if you did ,I will have to ponder more.Take care,poem on
March 19th, 2022 17:27
dean langmuir said:
This one took a bit for me,words and composition,did you mean for slicing within to be left side of poem,if you did ,I will have to ponder more.Take care,poem on
March 19th, 2022 17:27
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