Comments received on poems by MikeDubisch



Beacon
L. B. Mek said:

consequence, as enforced
choice-less, Choice
so all, hide - to survive
and fall, into destiny\'s trap...
if only, in life
we could ask for our bill\'s, early
let other\'s stay by the buffet
some of us, know
far too well
when its time, to duck
and Dive, within our Cocoon\'s
of denial...
(a write, I could relate with
on many levels
so much complex insight
distilled, accessible)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

April 8th, 2022 04:00

Beacon
dean langmuir said:

nice write,take care

April 7th, 2022 16:19

Witchfire
L. B. Mek said:

a good read, thanks for sharing

March 28th, 2022 04:57