Comments received on poems by MikeDubisch
Beacon
L. B. Mek said:
consequence, as enforced
choice-less, Choice
so all, hide - to survive
and fall, into destiny\'s trap...
if only, in life
we could ask for our bill\'s, early
let other\'s stay by the buffet
some of us, know
far too well
when its time, to duck
and Dive, within our Cocoon\'s
of denial...
(a write, I could relate with
on many levels
so much complex insight
distilled, accessible)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 8th, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
consequence, as enforced
choice-less, Choice
so all, hide - to survive
and fall, into destiny\'s trap...
if only, in life
we could ask for our bill\'s, early
let other\'s stay by the buffet
some of us, know
far too well
when its time, to duck
and Dive, within our Cocoon\'s
of denial...
(a write, I could relate with
on many levels
so much complex insight
distilled, accessible)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 8th, 2022 04:00