Comments received on poems by Albert Elod
Love makes you Vulnerable
Dahlia said:
very nice, great message
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 10th, 2022 15:57
Dahlia said:
very nice, great message
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 10th, 2022 15:57
Lightbringer
Christina8 said:
This is beautiful, like Rocky says, it\'s art! So many beautiful metaphors! Just absolutely wonderful job here.
April 5th, 2022 08:55
Christina8 said:
This is beautiful, like Rocky says, it\'s art! So many beautiful metaphors! Just absolutely wonderful job here.
April 5th, 2022 08:55
Lightbringer
Rocky Lagou said:
Yo, yooooo. This right here, THIS right here. Is art. I’m just gonna note some of my favorite lines:
“To have talent, I had to become a fighter”
“I carved out a face for gentleness”
“Gave shape to the dew of the morning”
I mean wowww. I love your metaphorical yet so deeply vivid words. You truly spark new inspiration to write and as you say “carve” words with our voices. This is beyond.
April 5th, 2022 08:49
Rocky Lagou said:
Yo, yooooo. This right here, THIS right here. Is art. I’m just gonna note some of my favorite lines:
“To have talent, I had to become a fighter”
“I carved out a face for gentleness”
“Gave shape to the dew of the morning”
I mean wowww. I love your metaphorical yet so deeply vivid words. You truly spark new inspiration to write and as you say “carve” words with our voices. This is beyond.
April 5th, 2022 08:49
The Flowers just like you
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow the imagery you\'re displaying is so rich! \"To parry the sword that swings to reap my soul / Like a wheat ear.\" Wow, I mean that is so beautiful. I find the central theme a little sad though since it\'s about the passing of a lover but as you mention, that hope that you\'ll be reunited one day is fervent. An amazing journey.
April 1st, 2022 12:21
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow the imagery you\'re displaying is so rich! \"To parry the sword that swings to reap my soul / Like a wheat ear.\" Wow, I mean that is so beautiful. I find the central theme a little sad though since it\'s about the passing of a lover but as you mention, that hope that you\'ll be reunited one day is fervent. An amazing journey.
April 1st, 2022 12:21
The Flowers just like you
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oh! Honey, what would I not give?
Be with me on earth
But flowers just like you
Are shattered in the wind
Scatter without saying a word
I sit in the flowerbed
the shadow lengthens
My thoughts shudder again!
When he reads you again
I hear a rustle on my way
A stream hums notes
from a song with broken measures
I\'m dreaming, in my mind
I rinse so clearly
The voice i loved without borders\'..
(love the ambiguity, you threaded
into what reads like, such a tender
exploration of intimate emotions..
\'indeed, if only
our flowery shampoo\'s
could also, wash away
and heal
those prickly thorns, imbedded
by impassioned love\'s
deep bruises\'..)
a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 1st, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oh! Honey, what would I not give?
Be with me on earth
But flowers just like you
Are shattered in the wind
Scatter without saying a word
I sit in the flowerbed
the shadow lengthens
My thoughts shudder again!
When he reads you again
I hear a rustle on my way
A stream hums notes
from a song with broken measures
I\'m dreaming, in my mind
I rinse so clearly
The voice i loved without borders\'..
(love the ambiguity, you threaded
into what reads like, such a tender
exploration of intimate emotions..
\'indeed, if only
our flowery shampoo\'s
could also, wash away
and heal
those prickly thorns, imbedded
by impassioned love\'s
deep bruises\'..)
a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 1st, 2022 05:45
