Comments received on poems by salemash



that\'s how it goes
L. B. Mek said:

depends, if it was a colour
I would say a brooding grey
that began to twinkle
a little brighter
reflecting, those evening stars
when dinner, promptly arrived
and all my concerns
were washed away, by that refreshing sip
of something cold and crisp..
lol
(wonderful positivity, thanks for sharing)

April 15th, 2022 03:38

saddest words
Rocky Lagou said:

That hits hard. Reconciliation will hopefully be on the horizon.

April 14th, 2022 09:12

saddest words
Dahlia said:

well penned
sometimes it just like that
keep poeming
Dahlia

April 13th, 2022 12:43