Comments received on poems by just.trying



Do i know this person?
Accidental Poet said:

No better time than the present to begin to know yourself. And poetry a great way to investigate.

December 19th, 2022 19:22

Do i know this person?
L. B. Mek said:

your worst, may be a favourite for someone else
keep inking, whenever Poesy\'s muse visits
irrespective of outcome, do it for yourself first foremost
you have an insightful voice
that can offer solace
to those fated to heed your words..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(I couldn\'t help, but hear these lines
from India Arie\'s song \' a private party\'
in your words:
\'\'I\'m having a private party
Ain\'t nobody here but me, my angels, and my guitar, singin\'
Baby, look how far we\'ve come, yeah
I\'m havin\' a private party
Learning how to love me
Celebrating the woman I\'ve become, yeah

I\'m gonna take off all my clothes
Look at myself in the mirror
We\'re gonna have a conversation
We\'re gonna heal the disconnection
I don\'t remember when it started
But this is where it\'s gonna end\'\')

December 19th, 2022 06:24

childhood home
Agatha_K said:

Wow I can really relate as a 25 year old, trying to connect with that inner child again, you get lost so much along the way you feel like you are loosing yourself but really you are on a journey of recovery ❤

October 9th, 2022 17:51

the final day
JudyStella said:

A very meaningful message, reminds that life is short and we should live to the fullest!

May 28th, 2022 14:56

the touch of a loved one
Jonas Robinson said:

The enjoyment of being with someone. Those things you just cannot communicate but you just know in your heart and in your meditation. Thank you for sharing. I have experienced this, it\'s sad that lefties don\'t often understand.

May 25th, 2022 16:15

the truth about not making memories
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I too can feel sad .. I’ve missed out on so much .. it definitely creates feelings of sadness grief and jealousy .. I understand . Some people get more happy memories than others ..

April 14th, 2022 15:33