Comments received on poems by Kittykoala
Fading Second
L. B. Mek said:
Hope is never a fruitless, endeavour
admittedly, it sure does take its time
to materialise, tangible results
but then again, like most good things
in life, eventually we realise
there is meaning, in our hours of waiting...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
stay strong, sweet treats - help
so treat yourself, once in a while)
April 19th, 2022 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
Hope is never a fruitless, endeavour
admittedly, it sure does take its time
to materialise, tangible results
but then again, like most good things
in life, eventually we realise
there is meaning, in our hours of waiting...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
stay strong, sweet treats - help
so treat yourself, once in a while)
April 19th, 2022 05:41
22 End Soon
L. B. Mek said:
\'A yearning that fuels my whims of demise
Crimson words inked by intent\'s need for self-insurrection
Lost in translating pulsing emotions
To thoughtfulness in abstract meaningfulness
Remnants of unbidden poetic intellect
All that\'s left, is bombastic contemplations
In all our piecemeal interactions
With a self
Absent from caring too much\'..
(forgive me dear Poet
when you mentioned, your write was incomplete
I couldn\'t help but try and poetically respond to you
and in my feeble way, attempt
to complete the poem that spoke to me
from within your words..
You are a visionary poet
in my humble opinion
and your skill for complex
internal rhyme schemes
aside those more traditional
is invigorating to read
for a wannabe scribbler like me..
thank you! dear Poet
for choosing to share
you poetic genius with us)
April 19th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'A yearning that fuels my whims of demise
Crimson words inked by intent\'s need for self-insurrection
Lost in translating pulsing emotions
To thoughtfulness in abstract meaningfulness
Remnants of unbidden poetic intellect
All that\'s left, is bombastic contemplations
In all our piecemeal interactions
With a self
Absent from caring too much\'..
(forgive me dear Poet
when you mentioned, your write was incomplete
I couldn\'t help but try and poetically respond to you
and in my feeble way, attempt
to complete the poem that spoke to me
from within your words..
You are a visionary poet
in my humble opinion
and your skill for complex
internal rhyme schemes
aside those more traditional
is invigorating to read
for a wannabe scribbler like me..
thank you! dear Poet
for choosing to share
you poetic genius with us)
April 19th, 2022 05:33
Fading Second
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Kitty. In my lfe all is wonderful, just look for that spark of light in your life and all will be well.
Andy
April 19th, 2022 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Kitty. In my lfe all is wonderful, just look for that spark of light in your life and all will be well.
Andy
April 19th, 2022 01:07
