Comments received on poems by Clarrie Kay Bee
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Rocky Lagou said:
Yooooooo, this is your FIRST poem?!! I can\'t wait to see what else you have to offer. That \"deflated sofa\" is so darn relatable. I literally adore this message of upliftment, whenever the days seem dim and dull we must hold onto that hope you convey. I also love the way you inlude profanity as I feel it actually conveys the message further, others may look down on it, but I find it revolutionary
May 13th, 2022 08:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Yooooooo, this is your FIRST poem?!! I can\'t wait to see what else you have to offer. That \"deflated sofa\" is so darn relatable. I literally adore this message of upliftment, whenever the days seem dim and dull we must hold onto that hope you convey. I also love the way you inlude profanity as I feel it actually conveys the message further, others may look down on it, but I find it revolutionary
May 13th, 2022 08:45
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L. B. Mek said:
\'Who really gives a fuck?
You
do give a fuck.
You are not made
to squelch in a corner,
Like a deflated sofa, comfortable still,
But past its best.
Your best day
has not yet been lived,
It is shining somewhere
And you won\'t even notice it
when it comes
Because you\'ll be spinning in the glory
of what you\'ve created
Out of you.\'
Brilliant!!!
May 13th, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Who really gives a fuck?
You
do give a fuck.
You are not made
to squelch in a corner,
Like a deflated sofa, comfortable still,
But past its best.
Your best day
has not yet been lived,
It is shining somewhere
And you won\'t even notice it
when it comes
Because you\'ll be spinning in the glory
of what you\'ve created
Out of you.\'
Brilliant!!!
May 13th, 2022 05:36
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Paul Bell said:
That\'s the attitude, fuck the past, the world is your oyster.
May 13th, 2022 04:33
Paul Bell said:
That\'s the attitude, fuck the past, the world is your oyster.
May 13th, 2022 04:33
