Comments received on poems by me.winston
Twisted Lies
L. B. Mek said:
(it\'s not the lies, that hurt
the most
often, it\'s the fact that
those
spewing the lies, know exactly
how to word them
and what parts of ourselves
to target, for our unsuspecting
gullible, trust
to fall
for their insidious, intentions;
in-short
their lies, only have the capability
to effect us, because
we let down our guards, and that
makes us feel
partly responsible, which hurts
deeper
than it should..)
forgive my opinionated, tangent
I found your wording to be immensely relatable
and your writing\'s pacing, so enticing..
thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2022 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
(it\'s not the lies, that hurt
the most
often, it\'s the fact that
those
spewing the lies, know exactly
how to word them
and what parts of ourselves
to target, for our unsuspecting
gullible, trust
to fall
for their insidious, intentions;
in-short
their lies, only have the capability
to effect us, because
we let down our guards, and that
makes us feel
partly responsible, which hurts
deeper
than it should..)
forgive my opinionated, tangent
I found your wording to be immensely relatable
and your writing\'s pacing, so enticing..
thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2022 03:36
Mask
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You never know . We might hear someone argue for example but not understand what it’s about . Can’t always understand people
May 14th, 2022 10:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You never know . We might hear someone argue for example but not understand what it’s about . Can’t always understand people
May 14th, 2022 10:40
