Comments received on poems by languale
about dreams
Natalia B. Odair said:
You have a lot of potential!! Thank you so much for writing this. I enjoy reading poems with a deeper, symbolic meaning, and this one takes the cake. The layers of depth are wonderful. Thanks for telling me to check it out- it was definitely a beautifully written, enjoyable read.
June 3rd, 2022 10:53
Natalia B. Odair said:
You have a lot of potential!! Thank you so much for writing this. I enjoy reading poems with a deeper, symbolic meaning, and this one takes the cake. The layers of depth are wonderful. Thanks for telling me to check it out- it was definitely a beautifully written, enjoyable read.
June 3rd, 2022 10:53
about dreams
crackingmeadows said:
Beautiful. The symbolism is meaningful. Thank you for writing this!
June 3rd, 2022 07:39
crackingmeadows said:
Beautiful. The symbolism is meaningful. Thank you for writing this!
June 3rd, 2022 07:39
about dreams
L. B. Mek said:
(such beautiful imagery
a wonderfully realised poem
brilliantly, anchored
and built around that \'blue flower\'
metaphor
or dream symbolism..
thanks for sharing)
but
some flowers are sturdy
even after being trampled
they still fight
their way, back up
you\'ll see them
circling themselves around
leaning, on a sturdy frame
all they need, is a chance
or a helping hand
the rest, they\'ll do themselves..
we need only, keep believing
in them...!
(dear poet, just fyi
Please note, you need not comment
on any of my scribbles
for me
to comment on your poetry
if I see it
and feel like it, i will comment
at every opportunity, I promise
most of us here at MPS
don\'t have
a \'quid pro quo\', culture)
June 3rd, 2022 02:45
L. B. Mek said:
(such beautiful imagery
a wonderfully realised poem
brilliantly, anchored
and built around that \'blue flower\'
metaphor
or dream symbolism..
thanks for sharing)
but
some flowers are sturdy
even after being trampled
they still fight
their way, back up
you\'ll see them
circling themselves around
leaning, on a sturdy frame
all they need, is a chance
or a helping hand
the rest, they\'ll do themselves..
we need only, keep believing
in them...!
(dear poet, just fyi
Please note, you need not comment
on any of my scribbles
for me
to comment on your poetry
if I see it
and feel like it, i will comment
at every opportunity, I promise
most of us here at MPS
don\'t have
a \'quid pro quo\', culture)
June 3rd, 2022 02:45
about dreams
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned languale. A dream is a gift you give to yourself. 😉
June 2nd, 2022 17:00
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned languale. A dream is a gift you give to yourself. 😉
June 2nd, 2022 17:00
about dreams
cherm said:
I enjoyed your poem L. Great job with imagery and flow. Great choice of color as well. 😊
June 2nd, 2022 16:42
cherm said:
I enjoyed your poem L. Great job with imagery and flow. Great choice of color as well. 😊
June 2nd, 2022 16:42
about dreams
GON said:
very synchronous moment you recommending me read this. i\'ve been reading the instigating agent for a while now and can\'t seem to stop thinking about dreams.
anyway, i love your form and i\'d love to see a better resolution to this!! not knocking it at all, but you could definitely do more with this concept and i\'d love to see it. will be following you to see what you do.
June 2nd, 2022 14:49
GON said:
very synchronous moment you recommending me read this. i\'ve been reading the instigating agent for a while now and can\'t seem to stop thinking about dreams.
anyway, i love your form and i\'d love to see a better resolution to this!! not knocking it at all, but you could definitely do more with this concept and i\'d love to see it. will be following you to see what you do.
June 2nd, 2022 14:49
about dreams
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful imagery, the metaphor for dreams was absolutely amazing and I really liked reading this. it makes me wanna follow my dreams or at least figure out what I want my life to be like
June 2nd, 2022 12:39
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful imagery, the metaphor for dreams was absolutely amazing and I really liked reading this. it makes me wanna follow my dreams or at least figure out what I want my life to be like
June 2nd, 2022 12:39
about dreams
JudyStella said:
Loved the imagery you have applied! And the line where you say don’t be too quick shows that success comes slow and to stay patient. Loved the message and the style!
June 2nd, 2022 12:33
JudyStella said:
Loved the imagery you have applied! And the line where you say don’t be too quick shows that success comes slow and to stay patient. Loved the message and the style!
June 2nd, 2022 12:33
about dreams
M. Evermore said:
I quite like your poem. It has a great metaphor, and you used it well to get your point across to the audience. Well done!
June 2nd, 2022 12:21
M. Evermore said:
I quite like your poem. It has a great metaphor, and you used it well to get your point across to the audience. Well done!
June 2nd, 2022 12:21
about dreams
orchidee said:
Good write L.
Nope, that\'s not me looking in for many of those 28 views (the last time I looked in!) lol.
June 2nd, 2022 12:12
orchidee said:
Good write L.
Nope, that\'s not me looking in for many of those 28 views (the last time I looked in!) lol.
June 2nd, 2022 12:12
about dreams
Thebeezybee said:
Blue is a beautiful colour. Using it to describe one\'s dream is also nice.
June 2nd, 2022 12:04
Thebeezybee said:
Blue is a beautiful colour. Using it to describe one\'s dream is also nice.
June 2nd, 2022 12:04
about dreams
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I absolutely love the reflection in this poem. A beautiful read!🍀
June 2nd, 2022 11:14
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I absolutely love the reflection in this poem. A beautiful read!🍀
June 2nd, 2022 11:14
about dreams
dean langmuir said:
Wonderful first poem you have submitted,your comments are bang on,thanks for sharing and reminding us to follow our dreams,poet on.
June 2nd, 2022 09:06
dean langmuir said:
Wonderful first poem you have submitted,your comments are bang on,thanks for sharing and reminding us to follow our dreams,poet on.
June 2nd, 2022 09:06
about dreams
hzugman said:
Very nice languale. I particularly like the final line. You have a gift.
June 2nd, 2022 08:19
hzugman said:
Very nice languale. I particularly like the final line. You have a gift.
June 2nd, 2022 08:19
