Comments received on poems by The One Who Sees
Maze
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful!
dealing with global warming
as modernity\'s, supposed plague
and yet, your Poetry\'s
worded warmth, is such a scarce
commodity of rare, empathy..
thanks for sharing
June 23rd, 2022 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful!
dealing with global warming
as modernity\'s, supposed plague
and yet, your Poetry\'s
worded warmth, is such a scarce
commodity of rare, empathy..
thanks for sharing
June 23rd, 2022 04:56
Without Me
Raven333 said:
really nice well rhymed poem. I love how sure and confident you were knowing without you in this world it just would not be the same. keep writing!!!
June 22nd, 2022 11:30
Raven333 said:
really nice well rhymed poem. I love how sure and confident you were knowing without you in this world it just would not be the same. keep writing!!!
June 22nd, 2022 11:30
Without Me
Meadow said:
Omg. I absolutely loved this poem. So very deep. Thank you for the visual you gave I could see it all being displayed right in front of me! Meadow
June 21st, 2022 19:34
Meadow said:
Omg. I absolutely loved this poem. So very deep. Thank you for the visual you gave I could see it all being displayed right in front of me! Meadow
June 21st, 2022 19:34
My Own Way
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I think you wonderfully captured
that threshold - moment
most of us, go through
far - too late
when we realise, that life
is mostly, all about what we do
and how we react/recover;
what\'s done to us
or our limiting, circumstances
are just the outlines, we
get to colour
the important details
and curate our lives, as best
we can
and realising, theirs comfort
in that
means letting go of the surreal
and finding acceptance
in our gifted, everyday breath of real..
(thanks for sharing)
June 20th, 2022 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I think you wonderfully captured
that threshold - moment
most of us, go through
far - too late
when we realise, that life
is mostly, all about what we do
and how we react/recover;
what\'s done to us
or our limiting, circumstances
are just the outlines, we
get to colour
the important details
and curate our lives, as best
we can
and realising, theirs comfort
in that
means letting go of the surreal
and finding acceptance
in our gifted, everyday breath of real..
(thanks for sharing)
June 20th, 2022 04:07
