Comments received on poems by Jaxxie



Seventy-Five Degrees
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 30th, 2025 17:58

Seventy-Five Degrees
sorenbarrett said:

A thought provoking read that casts the sensuality of female identity with a pride of being such against societal standards of what constitutes being a woman. It is set in light and carefree language but the message is much heavier. Well done

June 30th, 2025 04:21

The Velveteen Hills
sorenbarrett said:

A great portrayal of the seasons, whether in weather or in life seasons come and go in an eternal circle

December 24th, 2023 06:00

Me (The Thing)
peto said:

Loved the rhyme and flow
Great read

November 26th, 2023 20:16

I Severed The Telephone Cord (Telegram)
Thomas W Case said:

Brutal.

November 3rd, 2023 12:42

Placebo Dream
aDarkerMind said:

one for the archives here.

superb.

October 29th, 2023 06:43

Placebo Dream
2781 said:

Possibly.

October 29th, 2023 03:29

Should A Spider Kill A Fly
luckyphoenix said:

the deeper meaning is just wonderful

June 30th, 2023 23:40

Blood Of Rye
Goddess of the Mist said:

Very nice! I like the imagery and the flow.

June 7th, 2023 00:45

2022
amepiesces said:

you wrote it so beautifully....and the feelings you wanted to convey..well i am here to tell you that you conveyed them 100%and i can relate a lot too.....

January 7th, 2023 04:53

Should A Spider Kill A Fly
MR.apocalypse said:

i like the metaphors they make sense

November 29th, 2022 20:58