Comments received on poems by Jaxxie
The Elephant Cowboy
Bobby O said:
The last line flipped me over again. There is some continuity both to your strategy to your choices. Oh, and let me get a third and to my confusion I always like the stuff the last line always gets me down.
February 17th, 2024 08:31
Bobby O said:
The last line flipped me over again. There is some continuity both to your strategy to your choices. Oh, and let me get a third and to my confusion I always like the stuff the last line always gets me down.
February 17th, 2024 08:31
We didn\'t build these streets for crazy people
Bobby O said:
I almost got it. I got lost on the last
Stanza.
February 17th, 2024 08:27
Bobby O said:
I almost got it. I got lost on the last
Stanza.
February 17th, 2024 08:27
We didn\'t build these streets for crazy people
2781 said:
It\'s not the streets
It\'s the foundations.
February 17th, 2024 06:04
2781 said:
It\'s not the streets
It\'s the foundations.
February 17th, 2024 06:04
We didn\'t build these streets for crazy people
Doggerel Dave said:
Such a picture of some streets I\'ve walked down in my time....
February 17th, 2024 05:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Such a picture of some streets I\'ve walked down in my time....
February 17th, 2024 05:44
The Velveteen Hills
sorenbarrett said:
A great portrayal of the seasons, whether in weather or in life seasons come and go in an eternal circle
December 24th, 2023 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
A great portrayal of the seasons, whether in weather or in life seasons come and go in an eternal circle
December 24th, 2023 06:00
Atheistic Rat
2781 said:
And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intersessor:
December 21st, 2023 22:39
2781 said:
And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intersessor:
December 21st, 2023 22:39
Atheistic Rat
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Look on my works ye mighty and despair\'
Not often I find myself lost for words, but as I sample your pieces, that\'s the position I find myself in.
All I have left: You quote from perhaps my all time favourite pieces of poetry.
December 10th, 2023 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Look on my works ye mighty and despair\'
Not often I find myself lost for words, but as I sample your pieces, that\'s the position I find myself in.
All I have left: You quote from perhaps my all time favourite pieces of poetry.
December 10th, 2023 02:07
Should A Spider Kill A Fly
luckyphoenix said:
the deeper meaning is just wonderful
June 30th, 2023 23:40
luckyphoenix said:
the deeper meaning is just wonderful
June 30th, 2023 23:40
Blood Of Rye
Goddess of the Mist said:
Very nice! I like the imagery and the flow.
June 7th, 2023 00:45
Goddess of the Mist said:
Very nice! I like the imagery and the flow.
June 7th, 2023 00:45
Parasites
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing
imbued with that frankness
of deep insight!
forgive me, I had to try
and ink the feeble poetic reply
below)
as shards we congregate
to aggregate a facsimile
of existential congruity
knowing
a fire alarm, somewhere
will set as free
or a deafening explosion
internally
will grant us that finite
mercy...
May 29th, 2023 02:51
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing
imbued with that frankness
of deep insight!
forgive me, I had to try
and ink the feeble poetic reply
below)
as shards we congregate
to aggregate a facsimile
of existential congruity
knowing
a fire alarm, somewhere
will set as free
or a deafening explosion
internally
will grant us that finite
mercy...
May 29th, 2023 02:51
Drunken Moth
Bobby O said:
Of never making it far- a tale w caution mixed with the exacting journey so aptly described.
May 6th, 2023 00:53
Bobby O said:
Of never making it far- a tale w caution mixed with the exacting journey so aptly described.
May 6th, 2023 00:53
2022
amepiesces said:
you wrote it so beautifully....and the feelings you wanted to convey..well i am here to tell you that you conveyed them 100%and i can relate a lot too.....
January 7th, 2023 04:53
amepiesces said:
you wrote it so beautifully....and the feelings you wanted to convey..well i am here to tell you that you conveyed them 100%and i can relate a lot too.....
January 7th, 2023 04:53
A Madman\'s Dream
orchidee said:
In a comedy film, a relative says \'I thought you were dead. How did you find out that you weren\'t?\'
The reply was \'Well, I saw my picture in the newspaper!\' lol.
December 22nd, 2022 14:20
orchidee said:
In a comedy film, a relative says \'I thought you were dead. How did you find out that you weren\'t?\'
The reply was \'Well, I saw my picture in the newspaper!\' lol.
December 22nd, 2022 14:20
Should A Spider Kill A Fly
MR.apocalypse said:
i like the metaphors they make sense
November 29th, 2022 20:58
MR.apocalypse said:
i like the metaphors they make sense
November 29th, 2022 20:58
Reflection of The Orange Lily
L. B. Mek said:
(indeed, but who can blame them
dear Poet
see, its so much easier to Hate
shake your head, in denial
point fingers, at those universally
marginalised
and count yourself lucky, its not you;
while
those being, victimised
choose, anger
because its easier, than striving
for forgiveness\', capacity
for self-Empowering, emancipation
and that makes it simple
to Hate, everyone
that accosts them
and then use that, as
their bases
for Nihilism\'s, self-Hate
and on
and on
and on
the cycle continues...
like Spring\'s blossoming Lily
foreshadowing
its Autumnal demise, despairingly)
thanks for sharing! such
a thought provoking read, dear Poet
June 30th, 2022 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
(indeed, but who can blame them
dear Poet
see, its so much easier to Hate
shake your head, in denial
point fingers, at those universally
marginalised
and count yourself lucky, its not you;
while
those being, victimised
choose, anger
because its easier, than striving
for forgiveness\', capacity
for self-Empowering, emancipation
and that makes it simple
to Hate, everyone
that accosts them
and then use that, as
their bases
for Nihilism\'s, self-Hate
and on
and on
and on
the cycle continues...
like Spring\'s blossoming Lily
foreshadowing
its Autumnal demise, despairingly)
thanks for sharing! such
a thought provoking read, dear Poet
June 30th, 2022 04:33
Recant
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
thank you for choosing to share, dear Poet
(the first two lines
make a complete Poem
just on their own)
\'When crow\'s, sing
their crooked, song
I reply, with
a heart of a cactus..\'
June 27th, 2022 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
thank you for choosing to share, dear Poet
(the first two lines
make a complete Poem
just on their own)
\'When crow\'s, sing
their crooked, song
I reply, with
a heart of a cactus..\'
June 27th, 2022 04:24
